求修改一篇口语测试的自我介绍

求修改一篇口语测试的自我介绍
求修改一篇口语测试的自我介绍

求修改一篇口语测试的自我介绍
Good afternoon,I am ZZH,an 18 years old boy from FuZhon.It is my pleasure to present myself in this test.As a contemporary college student,I am out-going and sporty.I enjoy exercising in my spare time,such as running and playing ball games.Football is my favorite one.Speaking of my family,it consists of 5 people --- my parents,my grandparents,and me!My family really love me and have given me lots of care.However,I did not live up to their expectation.I was admitted to XXX.Now,I am leading my university life,which could be very independence.Although I recognize that there are a number of differences between my present lifestyle and past studying lifestle,I will try my best to adapt to it.I believe I will reach a higher level with my continuous efforts.
contemporary college student- 你是想说现代大学生?我理解你的意思,但是在英文中这么说 doesn't make sense.
playing ball games- 我知道你想要说球类运动,但是在英文中它的意思的.蛋蛋的（男生下体.）游戏,你懂的,所以你要更具体一点
will reach a higher level - higher level of what?academic performance,extracurriculum activity?Be specific!
总体上我觉得你写的还不错.我看过很多中国学生写的作文,很多学生都试着用非常复杂sentence composition 但是基本都是错的,或者说出的意思是错的.我看你写的比较简单明了,所以错误率也低了一些.不过还有一些是你需要注意的.

我觉得要修改的地方太多了。你们口语测试还能自选题目吗？我们口语测试给了10个话题，都要准备，我可以把它给你参考一下。可能会有用。
What do you do in your spare time
When I am free,I usually listen to
music,see movies and play the badminton.To begin with,...

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我觉得要修改的地方太多了。你们口语测试还能自选题目吗？我们口语测试给了10个话题，都要准备，我可以把它给你参考一下。可能会有用。
What do you do in your spare time
When I am free,I usually listen to
music,see movies and play the badminton.To begin with,listening to music can
make me feel relaxed.What’s more,seeing movies can make me feel happy and I
enjoy the time when I am attracted by wonderful plots.Last but not
least,playing the badminton makes me feel energetic and energetic.I can forget
all my pressure after playing the badminton.


What is your personality trait
I have a strong need to belong,and I am
very loyal.To begin with,I am a good listener,I excel at helping others in
practical ways.In my spare time ,I enjoy engaging my senses through art,cooking
and music.In love,I express my emotions through actions.Taking care of others
is how I love them.At work,I do well in a structured environment.I can complete
tasks well and on time.In fact,I am dependable,competent and
detail-oriented.However,when someone don’t real know me ,they see me as boring
and stubborn.
When you are down,what makes you happy
When I am down,I usually listen to
music,see a movie or play the badminton to disperse my
concentration.First,listening to music can cheer me up and when I am listening
to music,I forget everything,all bad feelings go away.Second,seeing a movie is
a good choice as well because when you are attracted by the plots,you will feel
happy.Third,playing the badminton makes you feel tired and you have no energy
to think about other things and you will feel very happy after several hours’
exercising.

Who is your best friend
Nancy is my best friend.We began to meet
each other when we were in primary school.We have been best friends for nearly
10 years.She has long straight hair,big brown eyes and she is tall.Now we are
in different collges.When we meet each other,we usually talk about our school
lives.In summer holidays,we often go out to see a film or buy some things.We
always have a good time when we are together.I share all my sorrows and
happinsses with her because I think we should not have secrets between us.I
hope we will be best friends forever.
这几个是比较常见的话题，希望对你有帮助！

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