大学英语四六级高分作文亮点写作词汇大全

1. 适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观的反映事实，句子开头不要总是用we / I （比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. ） 举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so, its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.
　　2. 善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。
　　如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。
　　比如说： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that …
　　3. 一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的替换太宽泛的。（考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think,
　　people, opinion 等等）比如上面例子中，applicable替换proper, approaches替换ways, implement替换carry out, sharpen one's competitive edge替换enhance one's competitiveness（提高某物竞争力）
　　下面举一篇南京工程学院某位同学写的优秀作文（14分）的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。
　　Computer and I （ By Simmy ）
　　I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.
　　exceedingly 替换 very
　　thrilling 替换 exciting
　　sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb. be interested in sth.
　　google 替换 search
　　an army of 替换 a lot of
　　The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!
　　The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情; Increasing popularity 替换 more and more popular
　　Coincident with … 非常地道的句型，表达“与…一致”的意思，替换 With …
　　Advancement 替换 development英文写作翻译