not only did we get very tired but also very hungry as well .we get not only very tired but also very hungry as well .这两句都对吗?

not only did we get very tired but also very hungry as well .we get not only very tired but also very hungry as well .这两句都对吗?
not only did we get very tired but also very hungry as well .
we get not only very tired but also very hungry as well .这两句都对吗?

not only did we get very tired but also very hungry as well .we get not only very tired but also very hungry as well .这两句都对吗?
第一句：not only did we get very tired but also very hungry as well .
not only放在句首,后接句子时要用倒装结构.最好改成not only did we get very tired but very hungry as well .因为but also的变体1.省去also,只留but；2.省去but,只留also；3.but…as well；4.but also全部省略.
第二句：we get not only very tired but also very hungry as well 改成we got not only very tired but very hungry as well ,注意两句时态一致.

去掉 as well

都把as well 给去了