英语翻译本人在该公司负责卖场和门店的通讯类产品销售工作，在职期间通过自己的不断努力而得到公司的认可。通过在该公司的学习与锻炼，自己的沟通能力得到很大的进步，更加擅长交

英语翻译本人在该公司负责卖场和门店的通讯类产品销售工作，在职期间通过自己的不断努力而得到公司的认可。通过在该公司的学习与锻炼，自己的沟通能力得到很大的进步，更加擅长交
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本人在该公司负责卖场和门店的通讯类产品销售工作，在职期间通过自己的不断努力而得到公司的认可。通过在该公司的学习与锻炼，自己的沟通能力得到很大的进步，更加擅长交流。同事拓宽了自己的销售思路，学会应变更多的销售障碍。

英语翻译本人在该公司负责卖场和门店的通讯类产品销售工作，在职期间通过自己的不断努力而得到公司的认可。通过在该公司的学习与锻炼，自己的沟通能力得到很大的进步，更加擅长交
I was responsible for sales of communication products in superstore and stories of our company,I got the company's approval through keeping effort during work .My communication skills have made great progress through learning and practice in the company,and more skill at communication.meanwhile widened the selling ideas,learn to deal with more sales obstacles.
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Me in this company responsible for stores and restaurants communication products sales work, incumbency through his ongoing efforts and get the company's approval. Through in the company's learn...

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Me in this company responsible for stores and restaurants communication products sales work, incumbency through his ongoing efforts and get the company's approval. Through in the company's learning and exercise, your communication skills make great progress, more good at communication. Colleagues widened his selling ideas, learn to strain more sales obstacles.

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I am in charge of the sales work of communication commodities in superstore and shops of the company, during the period, I got recognition from the company through my continuous endeavor. With the lea...

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I am in charge of the sales work of communication commodities in superstore and shops of the company, during the period, I got recognition from the company through my continuous endeavor. With the learning and practice, my communication ability is improved greatly, and I am more skilled in communicating with people. meanwhile, my view on sales is broadened, and I also learnt how to deal with various sale obstruction.
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I was appointed to take charge of the sales of communication products in the stores attached to the company, during which time I , by working hard ,was highly recognised by the company.I did make gre...

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I was appointed to take charge of the sales of communication products in the stores attached to the company, during which time I , by working hard ,was highly recognised by the company.I did make great progress in my ability to communicate with others and to exchange views with my colleagues concerning more approaches to sales ,and learnt ways to overcome more sales obstacles.

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在哪？刚刚做了补充I am responsible for the stores and store sales of communications products.And I am recognized by the company through my hard working during employment. By the company's learning and training...

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I was responsible for the sales of telecommunication products at sales fields and shops. My work was approved by the company through my own hard working during the incumbency. Meanwhile, I am better ...

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I was responsible for the sales of telecommunication products at sales fields and shops. My work was approved by the company through my own hard working during the incumbency. Meanwhile, I am better at communication result from the progress in the improvement of my communication skills with the study and exercise in the company. Besides, I could deal with more saling difficulties as my colleagues have broadened my marketing thoughts.

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