请帮我看看这段英文有无错误,Thank you for your confirmation letter.I’m sorry I haven’t answered it sooner,in that my computer has something wrong.And there is a important thing that I displaced the first name and last name by misstake

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请帮我看看这段英文有无错误,Thank you for your confirmation letter.I’m sorry I haven’t answered it sooner,in that my computer has something wrong.And there is a important thing that I displaced the first name and last name by misstake
请帮我看看这段英文有无错误,
Thank you for your confirmation letter.I’m sorry I haven’t answered it sooner,in that my computer has something wrong.And there is a important thing that I displaced the first name and last name by misstake,for the different habit between 西方 and China.正确的应该是——my first name is Hong,my last name is LI,but I have corrected this error in the application which no.is 12345.
中文部分是不会写的,请大家添加..

请帮我看看这段英文有无错误,Thank you for your confirmation letter.I’m sorry I haven’t answered it sooner,in that my computer has something wrong.And there is a important thing that I displaced the first name and last name by misstake
Thank you for your confirm letter (我在英国,大家都是叫confirm letter的).I’m sorry I haven’t reply(我觉得用reply更好,answer太口语化了) it sooner,in that my computer has something wrong.And there is an(一定是an不是a) important thing that I displaced the first name and last name by mistake,for the different habit between West and China.The correct information is——my first name is Hong,and my last name is LI.I have corrected this error in the application which no.is 12345.

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Thank you for your confirmed（要用形容词修饰后面的名词） letter，I’m sorry I haven’t replied it in time,because there was something wrong with my computer ,And there is a important thing that I displaced the first name and last name by mistake,for the different habit between Western and Chinese.The correct answer is my first name is Hong,my last name is LI,and I have corrected the mistake in the application which No. 12345。

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Thank you for your confirmation. Because there was something wrong with my computer, so I didn't reply you in time. Sorry that I made a mistake about my name last time, my surname is Li and my given name is Hong. I have corrected it in the application no.12345.

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看一下我帮你改的，不能保证全对，仅供参考
Thank you for your comfirmation letter,i am really sorry, i didn't reply as soon as i could.Because the computer i used went wrong.And i made a big mistake, i wrote my Surname before my given name,for i forgot that ,there is a certain difference about how to sign a name between the west and China. The correct spelling should be Hong Li,However I have corrected it in my application ,whose number is 12345.
写在后面
现在这已经不是什么错了，大多数外国人都知道中国人的姓名不一样，
这已经成为常识了，

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I'm sorry I haven't answered it earlier, in that my conputer has gone wrong. There is an important thing that I displaced my first name and last name by mistake, for the different habit between west and China. The correct one is my first name is Hong and my last name is Li, however, I have corrected this error in the No. 12345 application.
在你的原话中application后应是用whose 作定语

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Thank you for your confirmation letter. I’m sorry I haven’t answered it earlier(用earlier比sooner更准确), because my computer has something wrong. And there is an(用 an 而不用a,我想这可能是您的笔误) important thing that I displaced the first name and the last name by mistake. For the different habit between West and China, the correct spelling should be----my first name is Hong and my last name is Li. I have corrected this error in the application which number is 12345.

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Thank you for your confirmation letter!
So sorry for the late reply. I'm writing to inform you of the mistake I've done with my name in the application no.12345. Actually, my first name is Hong, and my last name is Li. I have corrected it and thanks for your attention. (这样简洁点，你那样写太罗嗦、拖沓了）