下面这段话有错吗M Y JOB AND MY LIFEI have been in Shanghai since I was born.After graduated from unversity,I became a office worker in a small company.Although this is my first job,I has met a lot of problems of myself.I can not sure I like t

下面这段话有错吗M Y JOB AND MY LIFEI have been in Shanghai since I was born.After graduated from unversity,I became a office worker in a small company.Although this is my first job,I has met a lot of problems of myself.I can not sure I like t
下面这段话有错吗M Y JOB AND MY LIFE
I have been in Shanghai since I was born.After graduated from unversity,I became a office worker in a small company.Although this is my first job,I has met a lot of problems of myself.I can not sure I like the job or not.Anyway,I think I should do it well before find the job what I want to do.

下面这段话有错吗M Y JOB AND MY LIFEI have been in Shanghai since I was born.After graduated from unversity,I became a office worker in a small company.Although this is my first job,I has met a lot of problems of myself.I can not sure I like t
I m living in Shanghai since I was born.After my graduation from unversity,I worken as a office clerk in a small company.It was my first job,I encountered a lot of problems of myself.I am not sure whetherI like the job or not.Anyway,I will try my best on current job before I find a new one.
尽可能没有语法错误,而且,要是你的实际英语能力还比较可以的话,最好把你的这段话写得更出彩一些.

有几处错误，修改如下：
I have been in Shanghai since I was born. After graduating from the unversity, I became an office worker in a small company. It is my first job and I have met a lot of problems. I am n...

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有几处错误，修改如下：
I have been in Shanghai since I was born. After graduating from the unversity, I became an office worker in a small company. It is my first job and I have met a lot of problems. I am not sure whether I like the job or not. Anyway, I think I should do it well before finding the job I want to do.

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前面部分没有问题！
Although this is my first job, I has met a lot of problems of myself. I can not sure I like the job or not. Anyway, I think I should do it well before find the job what I want to do.

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前面部分没有问题！
Although this is my first job, I has met a lot of problems of myself. I can not sure I like the job or not. Anyway, I think I should do it well before find the job what I want to do.
改为：Although this is my first job, I have met a lot of problems in my work. I'm ont sure whether I like this job or not.Anyway, I think I should do it well before finding the job which I want to do.

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三楼的翻译不错,其它的都是中国式英语

some suggestions as the folloeing as:
1.office worker---employee,
2.I can not sure...----- I can not sure whether I like the job or not
3. do it well--------do well in my job untill i find another one which I like