Dear tom,I'm happy to accept your letter .Now I'll tell you about my plan to my summer vacation.My summer vacation will last for two months.I would go on a guided tour around our capital Beijing,there I can visit some places of interest .I will eithe

Dear tom,I'm happy to accept your letter .Now I'll tell you about my plan to my summer vacation.My summer vacation will last for two months.I would go on a guided tour around our capital Beijing,there I can visit some places of interest .I will eithe
Dear tom,
I'm happy to accept your letter .Now I'll tell you about my plan to my summer vacation.
My summer vacation will last for two months.I would go on a guided tour around our capital Beijing,there I can visit some places of interest .I will either tour the campus of Tsinghua University .Then I can spend four weeks take a summer course,hoping they will help me improve my future studies .After that,I'll stay at the home to relax myself.Because I think I will have a busily and colorful summer vacation.what about your plan for holiday
Yours,
Li Hua

Dear tom,I'm happy to accept your letter .Now I'll tell you about my plan to my summer vacation.My summer vacation will last for two months.I would go on a guided tour around our capital Beijing,there I can visit some places of interest .I will eithe
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