Yesterday morning I was walking in the street while I saw a car hit a little dog .The driver drove away,leaving a dog lying here.Because no one went to help him,Iran to him ,pick him up and was ready to taking him to the hospital.But a young man who

Yesterday morning I was walking in the street while I saw a car hit a little dog .The driver drove away,leaving a dog lying here.Because no one went to help him,Iran to him ,pick him up and was ready to taking him to the hospital.But a young man who
Yesterday morning I was walking in the street while I saw a car hit a little dog .The driver drove away,leaving a dog lying here.Because no one went to help him,Iran to him ,pick him up and was ready to taking him to the hospital.But a young man who stopped me ,saying that he was an animals doctor.He said he will do all he could help the dog,I ,together with the young man,who called him Mark,took the dog to his hospital for animals .Now the dog is much better and later I will go to the hospital to have a look the little dog.总共有十个,救命啊

Yesterday morning I was walking in the street while I saw a car hit a little dog .The driver drove away,leaving a dog lying here.Because no one went to help him,Iran to him ,pick him up and was ready to taking him to the hospital.But a young man who
Yesterday morning I was walking in the street when I saw a car hit a little dog .The driver drove away,leaving the dog lying here.Because no one went to help him,I ran to him ,picking him up and was ready to take him to the hospital.But a young man who stopped me ,saying that he was an animal doctor.He said he will do all he could to help the dog.I ,together with the young man,who was called Mark,took the dog to his hospital for animals .Now the dog is much better and later I will go to the hospital to have a look at the little dog.

修改版 Yesterday morning I was walking in the street when I saw a car hitting a little dog .The driver drove away,leaving a dog lying here.Because no one went to help him,I ran to him , picking him up...

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修改版 Yesterday morning I was walking in the street when I saw a car hitting a little dog .The driver drove away,leaving a dog lying here.Because no one went to help him,I ran to him , picking him up and was ready to take him to the hospital.But a young man stopped me ,saying that he was an animals doctor.He said he would do all he could to help the dog,I ,together with the young man,who called himself Mark,took the dog to his hospital for animals .Now the dog is much better and later I will go to the hospital to have a look at the little dog.

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1 while改when 2 a dog 改为the dog 3 pick改为picked 4 was ready to taking him 改为was ready to take him 5 who去掉 6animals改为 animal 7will改为would 8 could help 改为 could to help 9called him ...

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1 while改when 2 a dog 改为the dog 3 pick改为picked 4 was ready to taking him 改为was ready to take him 5 who去掉 6animals改为 animal 7will改为would 8 could help 改为 could to help 9called him Mark 改为 called himself Mark 10 have a look the little dog 改为 have a look at the little dog
完成，应该不会有问题了。

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