英语作文改错.After graduation,many college students may face the question that,where to work,metropolis or small city.Many of them may tend to choose the first.In their opinion,metropolis means more chances,better living condition,and higher so

英语作文改错.After graduation,many college students may face the question that,where to work,metropolis or small city.Many of them may tend to choose the first.In their opinion,metropolis means more chances,better living condition,and higher so
英语作文改错.
After graduation,many college students may face the question that,where to work,metropolis or small city.Many of them may tend to choose the first.In their opinion,metropolis means more chances,better living condition,and higher social status.On the contrary,working in the metropolis also can give rise to many difficulties,such as,you should pay more for you living materials,and the air condition is not as good as in small city,what’s more,your pressure coming from work and society may become a big problem.After all,if you prefer a busy pace and challengeable life,metropolis may be more suitable for your taste.
Nowadays,more and more people are interested in living a cozy country life.A small city can leave you a peace of mind,and,obviously,it is good for your health.People today face high pressure and they are tired of living in high pace.So they choose to stay in a small city,just enjoying the pleasure of a cozy life.
Above all,working in metropolis or small city just depends on your own pinion.

英语作文改错.After graduation,many college students may face the question that,where to work,metropolis or small city.Many of them may tend to choose the first.In their opinion,metropolis means more chances,better living condition,and higher so
face the question of where to work,metropolis or small cities.
the first -- the first one
also can give rise to many difficulties -- also can bring more difficulties
air condition是空调的意思.---- air quality
what’s more,前面应该是句号.
your pressure coming from work and society 不用coming.直接from就行
busy pace -- busy paced
for your taste.- for you.
a peace of mind - a peaceful mind
above all - after all
working in metropolis or small city just depends on your own pinion.- it depends on your own opionion to work in .

After graduation, many college students may face the problem of where to work,in big cities or in small towns. Many of them may tend to choose the first. In their opinion, metropolis means more chan...

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After graduation, many college students may face the problem of where to work,in big cities or in small towns. Many of them may tend to choose the first. In their opinion, metropolis means more chances, better living condition,s and a higher social status. However, working in the big city also can give rise to many difficulties,for example, you should pay more for you living necessities, and the air condition is not as good as in a small city, What’s more, your pressure from work and from other poeple in society may become a big problem. After all, if you prefer a busy pace and challenging life,the big city may be a better choice for you.
Nowadays, more and more people are interested in living a cozy country life. A small city can leave you a peace of the mind, and, obviously, it is good for your health. People today face high pressure and they are tired of living in high pace. So they choose to stay in a small city, just to enjoy the pleasure of a cozy life after a day's hard work
.Anyway, working in the metropolis or a small city is just up to you to decide...... .

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small cities
means去掉s
condition,加s
pay more attention to living in ..
small cities
your pressure coming from work and society may become a big problem中的become加s
A small city can leave you a peace of mind中leave改为give
small cities