On the one hand,when I was a little child,I'm interested in motor vehicle very much.And it is well known the German automobile industry is best all over the world.So German education must be high quality,scrupulously and scientifically too.On the oth

On the one hand,when I was a little child,I'm interested in motor vehicle very much.And it is well known the German automobile industry is best all over the world.So German education must be high quality,scrupulously and scientifically too.On the oth
On the one hand,when I was a little child,I'm interested in motor vehicle very much.And it is well known the German automobile industry is best all over the world.So German education must be high quality,scrupulously and scientifically too.On the other hand,Germany have beautiful and quiet environment ,also have some places of interests such as Cologne Cathedral ,Roman Forum,Brandenburg Gate and so on.General speaking,to study abroad in Germany not only can study useful knowledge ,exercise my dependent,but also can open my eyes and go through different culture.这是参加德国面试的时候如果问为什么去德国的时候说的话,谁帮我看看有没有语法错误或者什么不妥的吧,

On the one hand,when I was a little child,I'm interested in motor vehicle very much.And it is well known the German automobile industry is best all over the world.So German education must be high quality,scrupulously and scientifically too.On the oth
to study in german,i can not only study…,but also can broden my horizons because i can experience its culture.

你这里面有很多致命的语法和常识错误，帮你修改了一下，建议你再拿去给你的指导老师看一下。On one hand,when I was a little boy/girl, I was interested in motor vehicle very much. And it is well known that the German automobile industry is the best i...

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你这里面有很多致命的语法和常识错误，帮你修改了一下，建议你再拿去给你的指导老师看一下。On one hand,when I was a little boy/girl, I was interested in motor vehicle very much. And it is well known that the German automobile industry is the best in the world. I think German education must have a relatively high quality,scrupulously and scientifically. On the other hand, the environment is nice and the air is clean there. Germany also have some places of interest such as the Cologne Cathedral , the Roman Forum, Brandenburg Gate and so on. Generally speaking, I can not only learn useful knowledge and exercise my abilities, but also can broaden my horizon and go through the charming of different cultures.

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