Today I want to talk my hobbywith us.Watching anime is one of the favorite things I like to do.Some one may say watching anime is awaste of time and kind of naive thing,but I don't think so.In fact,I can learn a lot fromwatching anime.For example,tha

Today I want to talk my hobbywith us.Watching anime is one of the favorite things I like to do.Some one may say watching anime is awaste of time and kind of naive thing,but I don't think so.In fact,I can learn a lot fromwatching anime.For example,tha
Today I want to talk my hobbywith us.
Watching anime is one of the favorite things I like to do.Some one may say watching anime is awaste of time and kind of naive thing,but I don't think so.In fact,I can learn a lot fromwatching anime.
For example,that the animetaught me never give up and it helps me have confidence.
It also told us to learn to believe friends and make us beoutgoing.Such as Bleach,Naruto,natsume yuujinchou.
I like the person in the anime too.Because they aremore stronger and warmer than the real people.They always respect theirenemy.And the best emotion is showed in the anime.
Watching anime make me feel better in my true life.Because another world is morecleaning and true.
In a word,I love anime what a best thing in my heart.是自己写的,要背下来做Eglish reporte,看看有没有错误

Today I want to talk my hobbywith us.Watching anime is one of the favorite things I like to do.Some one may say watching anime is awaste of time and kind of naive thing,but I don't think so.In fact,I can learn a lot fromwatching anime.For example,tha
这个是我个人意见.
首先,第一段的with us没有多大必要,这要的表达也不对
第二段的1.Watching anime is one of the favorite things I like to do.（do 改成doing）
2.Some one may say watching anime is (a waste of time）（这里改成wasting time) and (+个a) kind of naive thing,
3.I can learn a lot （+of things）from watching anime.
4.It also told us (+how)to learn to believe friends and make us beoutgoing.
5.Because they are more(不要more) stronger and warmer than the real people
6.Watching anime make(makes) me feel better in my true life.
7.Because another(换成the anime‘s） world is morecleaning and true.
不管怎么说,这样打好辛苦的!

我只能说好多，中式英语 时态用错。看到一半我都不想看下去了。怎么一个说对，一个说错。。。还是不要用了吧 差不多很多长句都有错 不够简洁 我都懒得改 楼主不是我打击你 多多阅读 把基本的词语用法学好再写吧 唉是有待提高，但是明天就要用了，只能先随便改一下应付应付了。。。谢仁兄...

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我只能说好多，中式英语 时态用错。看到一半我都不想看下去了。

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没有错误，很好
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