1. to begin learning in the public school system.C.when each Sept a class of fresh faced,eager kindergartners arrives by school busD.Each Sept a class of fresh faced,eager kindergartners arrives by school bus但是我觉得是C.D中感觉有两个句

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1. to begin learning in the public school system.C.when each Sept a class of fresh faced,eager kindergartners arrives by school busD.Each Sept a class of fresh faced,eager kindergartners arrives by school bus但是我觉得是C.D中感觉有两个句
1. to begin learning in the public school system.
C.when each Sept a class of fresh faced,eager kindergartners arrives by school bus
D.Each Sept a class of fresh faced,eager kindergartners arrives by school bus
但是我觉得是C.D中感觉有两个句子了啊,C为什么不对?
2.By running an additional performance,the drama club members raised a
C.larger profit from ticket sales than the total profits from bake sales,car washes,raffles,and donations
我觉得原文就可以了啊,有平行嘛,为什么一定要选C?
3.At the annual dessert festival, pastries in elegant displays,drawing people from near and far to take part in
答案说没错,annual和yearly不算重复?
4.The only student a community service medal,the senior class president more hours of service other student when he helped build homes Guatemala last summer.
答案说是B,要怎么改?C好像没有平行的感觉,错了吧
5.A person who uses hand tools only hanging pictures and fixing window shades purchase the power tools developed for professionals.
答案说是没错,但是我觉得C应该用needs
6.Janet sent Howard to Richard's camp , that three weeks before Howard,
答案说D错了,怎么改?为什么?

1. to begin learning in the public school system.C.when each Sept a class of fresh faced,eager kindergartners arrives by school busD.Each Sept a class of fresh faced,eager kindergartners arrives by school bus但是我觉得是C.D中感觉有两个句
第一题C中用when句子成分不完整,只有包含when的从句,没了主句.D中只有一个简单的句子结构,楼主为什么说有两句话?
第二题比较对象是profit,所以larger要放在profit之前,而不是后面,且主句冗长,什么if they add都可以不要
第三题只有出现如annual yearly event这样的情况才是重复,他那个只不过的单词的替换而已,如果把后一个改成annually这个句子也是对的
第四题少连接词,应该是who/that has accumulated,应该是个定语从句
第五题need做情态动词,不用更改
第六题中hearing的主语变成three weeks了,所以不对,要加上Janet然后把hearing改成heard

1.D中是一个句子,逗号前后是并列的修饰成分。D比C简洁。
2 比较的时候要比同类相哦,profit 和if they added the profits 动词名词比不了。 larger profit 和total profits 才能比嘛