Hello,ladies and gentlemen,my name’s Elijah.Frist of all,I want to ask two questions——Why am I here?Of course,I was the champion of the last competition.And why could I win?Now I’ll show you my reasons.At school,my favorite subject is math,ho

Hello,ladies and gentlemen,my name’s Elijah.Frist of all,I want to ask two questions——Why am I here?Of course,I was the champion of the last competition.And why could I win?Now I’ll show you my reasons.At school,my favorite subject is math,ho
Hello,ladies and gentlemen,my name’s Elijah.
Frist of all,I want to ask two questions——Why am I here?Of course,I was the champion of the last competition.And why could I win?Now I’ll show you my reasons.
At school,my favorite subject is math,however,I always get better grade in English.Because I think math is the subject which we have to work hard.But in my life,English is a language,just like speaking.
When I was 7,my mom let me start to learn English,and I felt really great.But 2 years later,I gave up.Because I felt English is boring and useless.Therefore,it made my parents yell at me.
However,about 1 year later,I was 10,I found that studying English is important and useful.And I did not give up by now.So in my life,”succes” is just a simple noun,and “successful”is my own adjective!

Hello,ladies and gentlemen,my name’s Elijah.Frist of all,I want to ask two questions——Why am I here?Of course,I was the champion of the last competition.And why could I win?Now I’ll show you my reasons.At school,my favorite subject is math,ho
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Hello,ladies and gentlemen,my name’s Elijah.
First of all,I want to ask myself two questions and answer them.Why am I here?Because I obtained the champion of the last competition.And why could I win?I’ll show you the reasons now.
At school,my favorite subject is math.However,I always get better grade in English.I think math is the subject in which we have to work hard.But in my life,English is a language,just like speaking.
When I was 7 years old,my mom let me start to learn English,and I felt really great.But 2 years later,I gave it up.Because I felt English was boring and useless.As a result,my parents yelled at me.
However,about 1 year later,when I was 10,I found that studying English was important and useful,so I began studying it again.And I haven't given it up by now.So in my life,”succes” is just a simple noun,and “successful”is my own adjective!

Hello,ladies and gentlemen,my name’s Elijah.
Frist of all,I want to ask two questions——Why am I here?Of course,I was the champion of the last competition.And why could I win?Now I’ll show you my r...

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Hello,ladies and gentlemen,my name’s Elijah.
Frist of all,I want to ask two questions——Why am I here?Of course,I was the champion of the last competition.And why could I win?Now I’ll show you my reasons.
At school,my favorite subject is math,however,I always get better grade in English.Because I think math is the subject which we have to work hard.But in my life,English is a language,just like speaking.
When I was 7,my mom let me start to learn English,and I felt really great.But 2 years later,I gave up.Because I felt English is boring and useless.Therefore,it made my parents yell at me.
However,about 1 year later,I was 10,I found that studying English is important and useful.And I did not give up by now.So in my life,succes is just a simple noun,and successfulis my own adjective!就这样就可以了你写得已尽很好了

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