with the time goes by.the surplus collegelife's been came to countdown that entirely's been passive for me because it means that i never ever put on the school's uniform and can't observe any rules and rugulations of the schools,also can't listen any

with the time goes by.the surplus collegelife's been came to countdown that entirely's been passive for me because it means that i never ever put on the school's uniform and can't observe any rules and rugulations of the schools,also can't listen any
with the time goes by.the surplus collegelife's been came to countdown that entirely's been passive for me because it means that i never ever put on the school's uniform and can't observe any rules and rugulations of the schools,also can't listen any familiar sounds.all in all,i really really don't want to lose all of it.for me,the schooltime is as friendly as bosom friend who genuine friend,i mean can trully assist and arouse me when i fall into any troubles and varied setbacks instead of outward,superficial fellows.through the lifetime,i understand lot's of things about how to be a man,may be i was born in different,unique circumstance,may be the transmigration exists really or my previous life had did special something else.why i said like that,because i am a prayerful buddhist and i believe in any what the buddhism said as well.i extremely like to do something about my nationality and i will fight for her!
请告知这种文章算 下 中 上 那种等级啊!我很想知道自己水平,

with the time goes by.the surplus collegelife's been came to countdown that entirely's been passive for me because it means that i never ever put on the school's uniform and can't observe any rules and rugulations of the schools,also can't listen any
在中以上,靠近上,在修炼以下,等级就到上!
注意拼写,注意语法,你将为上之上!
帮你稍加修改如下:
As the time goes by,the surplus college life's been come to countdown that's entirely been passive for me because it means that I never ever put on the school's uniform and can't observe any rules and regulations of the schools,also can't listen any familiar sounds.All in all,I really really don't want to lose all of it.For me,the school time is as friendly as a bosom friend who,a genuine friend I mean,can truly assist and arouse me when I fall into any troubles and varied setbacks instead of outward,superficial fellows.Through the lifetime,I understand lot's of things about how to be a man,maybe I was born in different,unique circumstance,maybe the transmigration exists really or my previous life did do special something else.Why I said like that,because I am a prayerful Buddhist and I believe in any what the Buddhism said as well.I extremely like to do something about my nationality and I will fight for her!

中下--非正式书面
中下--正式书面
正式的书面用语尽量不要用简写，比如说's之类的。
有很多的fragment。
不要灰心，最好找writing center去看一下