作业帮改错题...Having completed twenty years of service,a gold watch was presented to Mr.Brown.本句话是前后不一致,应该增么改啊...
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改错题...Having completed twenty years of service,a gold watch was presented to Mr.Brown.本句话是前后不一致,应该增么改啊...
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Having completed twenty years of service,a gold watch was presented to Mr.Brown.
本句话是前后不一致,应该增么改啊...
改错题...Having completed twenty years of service,a gold watch was presented to Mr.Brown.本句话是前后不一致,应该增么改啊...
主语应一致为Mr.Brown
Having completed twenty years of service,Mr.Brown was presented with a gold watch.
Mr.Brown was presented a gold watch.
前半句的主语应该是Mr Brown 而不是gold watch
Having completed twenty years of service, Mr. Brown recieved a gold watch as a present.就是让前面的状语有主语
前面一句是现在分词作原因状语，同时前一句的动作发生在后句之前，所以用了having,意思是Mr.Brown完成了二十年的服务，被赠予了一块金表。
Having completed twenty years of service, Mr. Brown was presented with a gold watch.
前一句表主动，主语是人，所以是Mr. Brown 。
后一句很明显，你一定看出主语是a gold watch 了，而中间用逗号连接的句子，不可能出现两个主语，所以，把后一句助于改成 Mr. Brown 就ok啦~~...
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Having completed twenty years of service, Mr. Brown was presented with a gold watch.
前一句表主动，主语是人，所以是Mr. Brown 。
后一句很明显，你一定看出主语是a gold watch 了，而中间用逗号连接的句子，不可能出现两个主语，所以，把后一句助于改成 Mr. Brown 就ok啦~~~ O(∩_∩)O
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