作业帮帮我看看这篇英语作文中的错误.Sunday,May 10.Today I have Spring Outing.At the 7:00 a.m..I went to the East Lake where far 30km away from home.When I got there,the time is 8:30 a.m..On the morning.I have row the small boats,and lunch in a
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帮我看看这篇英语作文中的错误.Sunday,May 10.Today I have Spring Outing.At the 7:00 a.m..I went to the East Lake where far 30km away from home.When I got there,the time is 8:30 a.m..On the morning.I have row the small boats,and lunch in a
帮我看看这篇英语作文中的错误.
Sunday,May 10.
Today I have Spring Outing.
At the 7:00 a.m..I went to the East Lake where far 30km away from home.When I got there,the time is 8:30 a.m..
On the morning.I have row the small boats,and lunch in a small restaurant.The food was delicious!
And on the afternoon.I've climb a hill,and admire the beautiful view.And I've took some beautiful photos!
At the 4:00 p.m..I have to return to my home.
today,I am very happy!
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以上是一篇英语作文.帮我看看错在哪里并改正谢谢!
帮我看看这篇英语作文中的错误.Sunday,May 10.Today I have Spring Outing.At the 7:00 a.m..I went to the East Lake where far 30km away from home.When I got there,the time is 8:30 a.m..On the morning.I have row the small boats,and lunch in a
英语日期是先日后月,“May 10”,有误
I have Spring Outing中“have”这个动词我觉得不恰当,而且,你整篇文章是过去式.
At the 7:00 a.m中不用冠词the
far 30km away 改为30KM far away
the time is 8:30 a.m句式啰嗦,改为IT'S 8:30 a.m
On the morning将On改为in
I have row the small boats,时态不对
and lunch in a small restaurant改为i have lunch in a small restaurant
on the afternoon同上
I've climb a hill时态
admire 用词不恰当
And I've took some beautiful photos!时态
have to return to my home时态
我晕!应该没有了吧!