短文改错 I sometimes just wanted to sit in the dark.I hate to admit this,or sometimes when I’m feeling bad,I’ll lock myself in the bathroom,turn away the lights and just sit on the floor.I don’t know what.Maybe I feel comfortable and relaxe

短文改错 I sometimes just wanted to sit in the dark.I hate to admit this,or sometimes when I’m feeling bad,I’ll lock myself in the bathroom,turn away the lights and just sit on the floor.I don’t know what.Maybe I feel comfortable and relaxe
短文改错 I sometimes just wanted to sit in the dark.I hate to admit this,or sometimes when I’m feeling bad,I’ll lock myself in the bathroom,turn away the lights and just sit on the floor.I don’t know what.Maybe I feel comfortable and relaxed in totally darkness.Sometimes,I just stare into the darkness without think of anything.Maybe I’m sitting there waiting for someone show up.I also think of all kind of things sometimes.I will not only think of the things that they happened in the past,but imagine what will happen in a future.It really helps as I will be happier after that

短文改错 I sometimes just wanted to sit in the dark.I hate to admit this,or sometimes when I’m feeling bad,I’ll lock myself in the bathroom,turn away the lights and just sit on the floor.I don’t know what.Maybe I feel comfortable and relaxe
I sometimes just wanted(want) to sit in the dark.I hate to admit this,or sometimes when I’m feeling bad,I’ll lock myself in the bathroom,turn away(off) the lights and just sit on the floor.I don’t know what(why).Maybe I feel comfortable and relaxed in totally(total) darkness.Sometimes,I just stare into(at) the darkness without think(thinking) of anything.Maybe I’m sitting there waiting for someone (加to) show up.I also think of all kind(kinds) of things sometimes.I will not only think of the things that they(去掉) happened in the past,but imagine what will happen in a(the) future.It really helps as I will be happier after that

这是你自己写的吗，如果是的话，那我跟你的用语方式不太一样。注意一下时态；注意短语的正确使用比如说turn away the lights好像是不对的、i don,t know why 可能要合适些、without 一般是后加doing sth、that they happend 里那个they 是多余的、in the future ……呵呵，加油。...

全部展开

这是你自己写的吗，如果是的话，那我跟你的用语方式不太一样。注意一下时态；注意短语的正确使用比如说turn away the lights好像是不对的、i don,t know why 可能要合适些、without 一般是后加doing sth、that they happend 里那个they 是多余的、in the future ……呵呵，加油。

收起