短文改错,Dear tom It is six years since you came to our city for a visit .Great chang...短文改错,Dear tomIt is six years since you came to our city for a visit .Great change have been taken place in our city .Now the street is much wider and

短文改错,Dear tom It is six years since you came to our city for a visit .Great chang...短文改错,Dear tomIt is six years since you came to our city for a visit .Great change have been taken place in our city .Now the street is much wider and
短文改错,Dear tom It is six years since you came to our city for a visit .Great chang...
短文改错,
Dear tom
It is six years since you came to our city for a visit .Great change have been taken place in our city .Now the street is much wider and more beautiful .Tall building can be seen everywhere .Thanks for the efforts made by the government to fighting pollution ,the public and it's a nicely place to take a walk and have some fun.But weare living a very happy life now.Ihope you can come to up city again in the near future.Ibelive you'll enjoy your stay there.
Yous,
Yang Bin
本文共10处错误文章除了结尾的Yours是笔勿以外还有开头的Tom以外，其余还有10处错误，要全文修改并回复！记住是全文！

短文改错,Dear tom It is six years since you came to our city for a visit .Great chang...短文改错,Dear tomIt is six years since you came to our city for a visit .Great change have been taken place in our city .Now the street is much wider and
1.tom(Tom) 2.change(changes) 3.been(去掉,take place无被动式） 4.building(buildings) 5.fighting (fight) 6.But（And) 7.nicely(nice) 8.up(our) 9.there(here) 10.Yous(Yours）

tom(Tom) been(去掉，第二句） building(buildings) efforts（后面加which）
But（And) nicely(nice) up(our) there(here)
Yous（Yours）

tom改为Tom。 change-changes，been去掉，wider前面的much去掉。building后面加s。thanks后面的for改为to。fighting改为fight。 nicely改为nice。 But改为And。up改为our。 there改为here。

tom-Tom, is-was, (been), building-buildings, frighting-fright, nicely-nice, But-And, up-our, stay-staying, there-here，横线后面是正确的词，括号里的词表示删除。

时态错误的呀

changes have taken place
streets are
buildings
Thanks to efforts by the government and the public in fighting pollution
a nice place
we are
I hope
come to our city
believe
here
这样改因百度仅允许100字