英语短文查错~help!I still remember this sentence.And I'm trying my best to go forward that direction.The forward road must have a lot of the difficulty and meet with many a setback.However,if we can stop our step?We can't!So even though we meet

英语短文查错~help!I still remember this sentence.And I'm trying my best to go forward that direction.The forward road must have a lot of the difficulty and meet with many a setback.However,if we can stop our step?We can't!So even though we meet
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I still remember this sentence.And I'm trying my best to go forward that direction.
The forward road must have a lot of the difficulty and meet with many a setback.However,if we can stop our step?We can't!
So even though we meet a lot setback which will make us disheartened very much,we should not give up,set your jaw,forget ahead. Strenght is in your struggling to the goal.
Sunshine always comes after rain,If you dont experience the storm first,how can we feel the warmth of the sunshine.
Now will not be future,failing once does not mean failure forever, Suceeding once does not mean you will never fail.
"Never be unduly elated by victory or depressed by defeat" ,this is what we should remember!
From now on,let's control the time properly to acheive!
Everybody, please believe in your ability, Let's do it together!
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英语短文查错~help!I still remember this sentence.And I'm trying my best to go forward that direction.The forward road must have a lot of the difficulty and meet with many a setback.However,if we can stop our step?We can't!So even though we meet
I still remember this sentence,and I'm trying my best to go forward IN that direction.
The (XXforwardXX) road AHEAD must have a lot of the difficultIES and meet with many setback.However,if CAN WE stop (XXour stepXX)?We can't!
So even though we meet a lot setback which will (XXXmake usXXX) disheartened very much,we should not give up,set your jaw,(XXforgetXX) FORGE ahead.(XXStrenghtXX) STRENGTH is in your struggling to the goal.
Sunshine always comes after THE rain,If you dont experience the storm first,how can we feel the warmth of the sunshine .
Now will not be future,failing once does not mean failure forever,SuCceeding once does not mean you will never fail.
"Never be unduly elated by victory or depressed by defeat" ,this is what we should remember!
From now on,let's control the time properly to acheive!
Everybody,please believe in your ability,Let's do it together!

The forward road--the road ahead
many a setback--many setbacks
if we can stop our step?--Can we stop our steps?
set your jaw,forget ahead.--chin up,keep moving
Strenght is in your stru...

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The forward road--the road ahead
many a setback--many setbacks
if we can stop our step?--Can we stop our steps?
set your jaw,forget ahead.--chin up,keep moving
Strenght is in your struggling to the goal.--keep straight to the goal
Now will not be future(太中式了)--省去好了．后面那句可以表达这个意思了
let's control the time properly to acheive!－Let's regulate our time to achieve our final goals(这样好点)
总体感觉．有中式英文的味道．不过已经可以了．问下你的什么年级？

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