请会英文的帮我修改我的句子语法 正在做一个 幼保的 assignment - profile以下是我写的 introduction请帮我修改 我写的introduction 语法如有不顺畅或奇怪的地方的话 请帮帮我适当地帮我删减或增加

请会英文的帮我修改我的句子语法 正在做一个 幼保的 assignment - profile以下是我写的 introduction请帮我修改 我写的introduction 语法如有不顺畅或奇怪的地方的话 请帮帮我适当地帮我删减或增加
请会英文的帮我修改我的句子语法
正在做一个 幼保的 assignment - profile
以下是我写的 introduction
请帮我修改 我写的introduction 语法
如有不顺畅或奇怪的地方的话 请帮帮我适当地帮我删减或增加句子 让我写的更通顺
因为写得有点短 希望可以再帮我增加谢句子
以下
It’s very important for us to understand children’s development,what cause them to group up,and what impact their grow development,what kind of behavior during the different age groups etc.Needs
to get understand their physical or mental world.Being an educator or parent
We really have to know children action and reaction at different age’s group.Especially
from 1 to 2 years old children of this age,there have some different obviously
changes during this period.We can separate five different areas ; emotional,social,
intellectual,physical and interest .Through daily life activities,we can see
the five areas development,understand their specific behavior and attitude.In
order to get more understand children,and to prepare a good learning
environment for them.

请会英文的帮我修改我的句子语法 正在做一个 幼保的 assignment - profile以下是我写的 introduction请帮我修改 我写的introduction 语法如有不顺畅或奇怪的地方的话 请帮帮我适当地帮我删减或增加
It’s very important for us to understand children’s development.What leads them to group up,and what can impact on their grow development,what kind of behavior during the different age groups It is necessary to grisp a good command of their physical or mental world.As educator or parent,We have to pay attention to children performance and various reaction at different age’s group especially from children at the age of 1 or 2 who present a distinct
transition during this period.We can classify into five different areas ; emotional,social,
intellectual,physical and interest .By means of daily life activities,we can observe
the development of the five aspects.Understand their specific behavior and attitude so that we can have a better understanding of children,and prepare a good learning
environment for them.

It’s very important for us to understand children’s development.What leads them to group up, and what can impact on their grow development, what kind of behavior during the different age groups It is...

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It’s very important for us to understand children’s development.What leads them to group up, and what can impact on their grow development, what kind of behavior during the different age groups It is necessary to grisp a good command of their physical or mental world. As educator or parent,We have to pay attention to children performance and various reaction at different age’s group especially from children at the age of 1 or 2 who present a distinct
transition during this period. We can classify into five different areas ; emotional, social,
intellectual, physical and interest . By means of daily life activities, we can observe
the development of the five aspects. Understand their specific behavior and attitude so that we can have a better understanding of children, and prepare a good learning
environment for them.

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It’s very important for us to understand children’s development, what cause them to group up, and what impact them development, what kind of their behavior during the different age etc. It is necessa...

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It’s very important for us to understand children’s development, what cause them to group up, and what impact them development, what kind of their behavior during the different age etc. It is necessary to get understand their physical and mental world. Being an educator or parent, We really have to know the children’s action and reaction at different ages. Especially from 1 to 2 years old children of this age, there are some different changes during this period. We can separate five different areas ; emotional, social,ntellectual, physical and interest . Through daily life activities, we can see the five areas development, understand their specific behavior and attitude. In order to get more about children, and to prepare a good learning environment for them.

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It's very important for us to understand children's development. In my opinion, there are several questions about it. For example, what influence their growth（你本身那句子是中国式英语，那是不对的，我照你的意思再造了一句）, what imp...

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It's very important for us to understand children's development. In my opinion, there are several questions about it. For example, what influence their growth（你本身那句子是中国式英语，那是不对的，我照你的意思再造了一句）, what impact their development, and what kind of behavior during the different age grades(年龄阶段）？If you want to solve these questions ,it needs to get understand their physical or spirit（用这更好）world. As an educator or parent we really have to know children's behaviours and reactions at different age grades. Especially from 1 to 2 years old ,children have some different obviously changes during this period. In which we can separate five different areas : emotional, social, intelligence, physical and interest . By way of observing their daily life activities, we can find the development of these five areas, and then to understand their specific behavior and attitude further(进一步地）.Besides, In order to get more understanding of children, we should prepare a good learning environment for them.

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It's very important for us to understand children's development, what cause them to group up, and what impact their grow development, what kind of behavior during the different age groups etc....

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It's very important for us to understand children's development, what cause them to group up, and what impact their grow development, what kind of behavior during the different age groups etc.
[搭配错误] 搭配不当，their grow不规范，建议修改。
[句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查！
[低频警示] their grow development 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语
[低频警示] the different age groups etc 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语
[搭配统计] 动名搭配 grow...development 在教材中出现过 8 次
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Needs to get understand their physical or mental world.
[句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查！
[动词错误] 动词连用，请检查get understand。
[搭配统计] 动名搭配 understand...world 在教材中出现过 244 次
[学习提示] 易混词汇: crazy, mad, mental 都表示“发疯的，精神错乱的”之意。
[批改提示] understand的近义表达有appreciate。
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Being an educator or parent We really have to know children action and reaction at different age's group.
[学习提示] 易混词汇: act, action, deed, operation, performance 均含“行为，行动”之意。
[批改提示] know近义表达有cognize/ recognize/ realize/ foreknow
[批改提示] 查看have to和must的区别。
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Especially from 1 to 2 years old children of this age, there have some different obviously changes during this period.
[句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查！
[学习提示] 易混词汇: baby, child, infant, youngster 均有“孩子”之意。
[低频警示] some different 在英语本族语中很少使用
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We can separate five different areas ; emotional, social, intellectual, physical and interest .
[标点错误] 标点与其前面的单词之间 不应该有空格，请检查
[学习提示] 易混词汇: district, region, area, section, zone, belt, quarter, neighbourhood 均有“地区”之意。
[批改提示] 批改提示，intellectual注意与intelligent，intelligible的区别。
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Through daily life activities, we can see the five areas development, understand their specific behavior and attitude.
[低频警示] the five areas development 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语
[搭配统计] 动名搭配 see...development 在教材中出现过 287 次
[学习提示] 易混词汇: district, region, area, section, zone, belt, quarter, neighbourhood 均有“地区”之意。
[批改提示] through的近义表达有across，in term of，via。
[批改提示] understand的近义表达有appreciate。
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In order to get more understand children, and to prepare a good learning environment for them.
[句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查！
[低频警示] prepare...good 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语
[低频警示] more understand children 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语
[搭配统计] 动名搭配 learn...environment 在教材中出现过 10 次
[搭配统计] 动名搭配 understand...child 在教材中出现过 25 次

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