明天上交作文,求大神改错,该对一个赞一个 I'm li Ming is the boy who明天上交作文,求大神改错,该对一个赞一个I'm li Ming is the boy who won the first prize in the English competition last week.Now,I want to share my lear

明天上交作文,求大神改错,该对一个赞一个 I'm li Ming is the boy who明天上交作文,求大神改错,该对一个赞一个I'm li Ming is the boy who won the first prize in the English competition last week.Now,I want to share my lear
明天上交作文,求大神改错,该对一个赞一个 I'm li Ming is the boy who
明天上交作文,求大神改错,该对一个赞一个
I'm li Ming is the boy who won the first prize in the English competition last week.Now,I want to share my learning experience with you.First,we should learn English well,you should form the good habit of keeping a diary every day,it helps to improve our writing level,second,we should actively take part in the English corner,it will make our oral English greatly improved.Finally,take some more about English reading websites,this will improve your reading,hold on,you will make progress!Believe in yourself.

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明天上交作文，求大神改错，该对一个赞一个
I'm li Ming is the boy who won the first prize in the English competition last week. Now, I want to share my learning experience with you. First, we should learn English well,...

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明天上交作文，求大神改错，该对一个赞一个
I'm li Ming is the boy who won the first prize in the English competition last week. Now, I want to share my learning experience with you. First, we should learn English well, you should form the good habit of keeping a diary every day, it helps to improve our writing level, second, we should actively take part in the English corner, it will make our oral English greatly improved. Finally, take some more about English reading websites, this will improve your reading, hold on, you will make progress! Believe in yourself.

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第一句用了两个谓语，应该是i am a boy named li ming who...嗯嗯，还有吗，😘英语竞赛一般用test嗯，谢谢你experience一般是指经验经历，用在哪儿不合适学习经验呀可以改为study way,你下面的不算是经验，算是方式或者好主意idea那老师，语法上都对着吧？恩，语法上没错嗯，有点对不起呀，我不知道只能给一个好评，能取消好评吗没关系，能帮到你就行...

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第一句用了两个谓语，应该是i am a boy named li ming who...

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