英语作文评析,重点找一下语法错误和拼写上的错误(小作文) POSTERThe Red Cross will give us a physical examination for next month.It will be held between 8:30 and 10:30,May 8.It will be held in our school.We should have no drinkin

英语作文评析,重点找一下语法错误和拼写上的错误(小作文) POSTERThe Red Cross will give us a physical examination for next month.It will be held between 8:30 and 10:30,May 8.It will be held in our school.We should have no drinkin
英语作文评析,重点找一下语法错误和拼写上的错误(小作文)
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The Red Cross will give us a physical examination for next month.It will be held between 8:30 and 10:30,May 8.It will be held in our school.We should have no drinking or eating before the examination.We should having a bath and wearing clean clothes,too.We all welcome to everybody.If you want to come,please get ready for it and take good part in it.I hope you can learn something from it.
Students' Union
Apirl 16th

英语作文评析,重点找一下语法错误和拼写上的错误(小作文) POSTERThe Red Cross will give us a physical examination for next month.It will be held between 8:30 and 10:30,May 8.It will be held in our school.We should have no drinkin
一,第一句去掉for.像next month,this weekend此类时间短语在句子里作状语前面一般不加介词.二,第三行We should 后面having应为动词原形have,wearing应为wear,因为should是情态动词,后接动词原形三,We all welcome to everybody算是chinglish中式英语,建议改为Everybody is welcome.例如平常我们说的不客气You are welcome.四,建议句语句之间适当加些连接词,如and之类的就行,是文章显得像个整体,而不只是几个句子的罗列.个人浅见,相互学习哈.

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The Red Cross will give us a physical examination next month.
Time: 8:30 and 10:30,May 8.
Place: in our school.
Tips: 1,no drinking or eating .
2...

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NOTICE

The Red Cross will give us a physical examination next month.
Time: 8:30 and 10:30,May 8.
Place: in our school.
Tips: 1,no drinking or eating .
2, having a bath and wearing clean clothes,
Everybody is welcome.
I hope you can learn something from it.
the Students' Union
April 16th

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名字错了,应是April,其它都对了

1.We should having（应为have） a bath and wearing（应为wear） clean clothes.
should do是正确搭配。
2，We all welcome to（应删掉） everybody。welcome sb即可
3，The Red Cross will give us a physical examination fo...

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1.We should having（应为have） a bath and wearing（应为wear） clean clothes.
should do是正确搭配。
2，We all welcome to（应删掉） everybody。welcome sb即可
3，The Red Cross will give us a physical examination for next month（是为了下个月么？如果想翻译为在下个月应不加介词for,可直接是next month）
4,If you want to come,please get ready for it and take good part in it.(这句我觉得有些别扭，take good part in 应该是好好参与的意思。整句翻译成如果你想来，请做好准备并好好参与其中。有木有别扭，如果你觉得没有的话，可以忽视这个点了，默——)
其他的就不知道了，希望能帮到你

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