作业帮请帮我看一下这个有没有语法错误star is singing songs to the rose,the melody of guitar runs around ears,i love you more than my words,say goodbye to precious,sorry did not give warm hugs,feeling hurt when i last time saw your tears,you w
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请帮我看一下这个有没有语法错误star is singing songs to the rose,the melody of guitar runs around ears,i love you more than my words,say goodbye to precious,sorry did not give warm hugs,feeling hurt when i last time saw your tears,you w
请帮我看一下这个有没有语法错误
star is singing songs to the rose,the melody of guitar runs around ears,i love you more than my words,say goodbye to precious,sorry did not give warm hugs,feeling hurt when i last time saw your tears,you will marry someone in wonderful dress,and i will play songs to beg for your happiness,oh dear,i will always miss you like the one and the only rose.有什么错误请帮我改一下好不好?
请帮我看一下这个有没有语法错误star is singing songs to the rose,the melody of guitar runs around ears,i love you more than my words,say goodbye to precious,sorry did not give warm hugs,feeling hurt when i last time saw your tears,you w
Star is singing songs to the rose,and the melody of guitar runs around ears.I love you more than any words.I say goodbye to precious things and I am sorry that I did not give you warm hugs.I felt hurt when I saw your tears last time.You will marry someone in a wonderful dress,and I will play songs for your happiness.Oh dear.I will always miss you as the only rose.感觉很中文啊.最近在学GMAT语法,看着每句话都有错的感觉- -.那个语法实在是太严格了,我简单的给你改了一下.仅供参考啦
不是歌词？感觉好有诗意，真的。我觉得没什么错误呀，有的东西真的不好说，有些地方省略的也非常漂亮。就是缺乏一点紧凑感，但这也正是我感觉有诗意的重要原因！就看你是干什么用了，只能说不太正式，但不错！加油。