帮我检查一下,英语面试的自我介绍,看一下有没有什么错误.Hi guys,That is a writing for English curriculum interview introduction (a school's homework),and please tell me any mistakes that you found.Thank you very much!Hi,I am of

帮我检查一下,英语面试的自我介绍,看一下有没有什么错误.Hi guys,That is a writing for English curriculum interview introduction (a school's homework),and please tell me any mistakes that you found.Thank you very much!Hi,I am of
帮我检查一下,英语面试的自我介绍,看一下有没有什么错误.
Hi guys,
That is a writing for English curriculum interview introduction (a school's homework),and please tell me any mistakes that you found.Thank you very much!
Hi,I am of great honour to stand here and introduce myself to you,My name is Junting Pan,I am currently a senior student at Maragall High School.My major is technology and I will receive my High School diploma after my graduation in June.I born in China,and I have been in Spain for many years,that means I can speak fluently Chinese,Spanish and Catalan.I passed the B2 of CEF exams in EOI,so I can also speak q English.I am seeking for a job for an Spanish(or Catalan)-Chinese interpreter.
I have worked as a interpreter in an law office during the summer holidays.It was challenging and I was work under a lot of pressure because the office was always very busy.I learned about the importance of good service,and working in different situation and also resolve different problems quickly.
I would like to offer to work on probation for a week,to show you my working actittud and translation capabilities,and I think I can do the job well if I can work for your office,as I always work hard in my work.
I would welcome an opportunity to meet with you for a personal interview.and please contact me via email anytime.Thank you for your consideration.

帮我检查一下,英语面试的自我介绍,看一下有没有什么错误.Hi guys,That is a writing for English curriculum interview introduction (a school's homework),and please tell me any mistakes that you found.Thank you very much!Hi,I am of
那个,楼主,本人英语水平也就那么回事,说几个我觉得有点问题的地方,楼主瞅瞅,自我感觉良好的话就无视我吧.
第二段 第三排 I born in China 貌似少了个be动词 I WAS born in China
第三段 第一排 暑假期间我在一个律师事务所做翻译 这一句 这个动作在过去开始 也在过去就已经结束 所以本人认为应该在这里使用过去完成时 I had worked ……
第三段 第一排 an law office 这里应该是a law office
第三段 第二排 I was work under a lot of pressure 一句 a lot of着重于强调物品的数量 比如许多人 a lof of people.这里楼主应该是要强调自己受到的压力很大,是表示程度,建议可以改一下,比如I was work under great pressure..
还有 就是 be动词后面这个work是否要加一下ING形式呢,老实说,我也很虚- -
第三段 第三排 最后一个长句子and working in different situation and also resolve different problems quickly.楼主在前一半使用了working 后一半则是resolvem,这时态貌似有问题.
第四段 第一排 错别词== attitud→attitude
第四段 第一排 第一句话 单方面看不懂什么意思…… 楼主莫拍,无视就好.
一段 第一排 contact一词表联系之意的时候,应该为 contact with sb,需在contact后跟with
以上就是小可的看法
希望能给楼主提供一些帮助
楼主如果有不同的看法的话 希望告知
飘走
再飘回来加一句
既然是参加面试
那么见面时的问候语就不应该用Hi