帮我看看这篇文章有没有严重的语法逻辑错误!Popularly speaking,intelligence is an agile mind.Intelligence,capacity ,wisdom,though they are in different spelling forms,yet refers to the same thing—the smartness and capacity to learn

帮我看看这篇文章有没有严重的语法逻辑错误!Popularly speaking,intelligence is an agile mind.Intelligence,capacity ,wisdom,though they are in different spelling forms,yet refers to the same thing—the smartness and capacity to learn
帮我看看这篇文章有没有严重的语法逻辑错误!
Popularly speaking,intelligence is an agile mind.Intelligence,capacity ,wisdom,though they are in different spelling forms,yet refers to the same thing—the smartness and capacity to learn.From psychological view,intelligence is the level of a man to recognize and do things.Therefore,intelligence is composed of the ability of observation,memorization,analysis,imagination and operation.
Intelligence is the most basic psychological condition for a man to live,study and work,the psychological assurance of keeping dynamic balance of natural environment and social circumstance.Thus intelligence is one of the most important standards of evaluating a man’s psychological health condition.
Generally speaking,ones that with extraordinary intelligence and that of low intelligence just take a small fraction.
Intelligence of most people is ordinary.Extraordinary intelligence refers to that the intelligence is above the average level of the ordinary.And extraordinary intelligence can be divided into two types,one type is that the intelligence is the intelligence is all-sided extraordinary,and the other refers to extraordinary ability at some particular aspect,e.g.maths,technology,language,music,art etc.,they show an extraordinary capacity.In the group of extraordinary intelligence the former type takes only a very small fraction compared to the latter one.Extraordinary intelligence and ordinary one usually belong to the scope of normal intelligence,both of which meet the basic demands of being psychologically healthy.In other words,the intelligence of most people meets the intellectual standards of being psychologically healthy.Low intelligence belongs to the abnormal scope,which can’t meet the intellectual standards of being psychologically healthy.Although those who are of low intelligence are just a small fraction in the public,their psychological illness will bring about big burden to family and society.
IQ tests carried out by foreign psychologist are usually to measure the level of intellectual development.Generally,it is considered low intelligence when the IQ is below 60.In daily life,there are two ways to judge whether someone is of normal intelligence.One is to his/her intelligence with that of a peer’s,the other is to see if he/she can adapt to daily life,study and work.One whose intellectual level falls far behind the others or can’t adapt to daily life,study or work should be further diagnosed to make sure if he/she is of normal intelligence or not.

帮我看看这篇文章有没有严重的语法逻辑错误!Popularly speaking,intelligence is an agile mind.Intelligence,capacity ,wisdom,though they are in different spelling forms,yet refers to the same thing—the smartness and capacity to learn
第一句就不对.intelligence是不可数的,怎么能是an agile mind,何况an agile mind也不能作为前者的定义或诠释.
Therefore,intelligence is composed of abilitIES of observation,memorY,analysis,imagination and operation（不知道这个OPERATION指的什么）.
第二段,直接改为：Generally speaking,those with extraordinary or extremely low intelligence make up a very small proportion.而且这句出现在这里十分莫名其妙.
Extraordinary intelligence refers to the intelligence (that is)above the average level of the ordinary.这个解释不说也罢,从字面上都能看出来.
第三段第二句,直接改为
one type excels in all aspects,and the other in a particular aspect,such as maths,logic,language,music,fine arts,etc.(技术是不可能的)
后面简直看不下去了,兴许楼主先追加50分以上能我有耐心继续看下去,我想到目前为止我已经很负责地帮你了.