英语翻译如果那地方不对给改改就更好了.When it comes to Internet,different people have different views on this issue.Some people hold that the advantages of Internet are far more than its disadvantages; however,in my opinion,with the

英语翻译如果那地方不对给改改就更好了.When it comes to Internet,different people have different views on this issue.Some people hold that the advantages of Internet are far more than its disadvantages; however,in my opinion,with the
英语翻译
如果那地方不对给改改就更好了.
When it comes to Internet,different people have different views on this issue.Some people hold that the advantages of Internet are far more than its disadvantages; however,in my opinion,with the society developing recently,is gradually becoming important is our lives.My explanations are as follows:
To begin with,Internet can bring people more benefits than we have ever expected.You can find that in your life The major change.For example,You can find out something you didn't know about on the Internet.As a result,Internet plays an important role in our society.
Moreover,no one can deny the fact that it gradually becoming important is our lives.If there were no Internet,our world would Will change.So essential is it that people cannot go without Internet.
However,Internet,like anything else,has its adverse side.For instance .It is hazardous to our health We cannot ignore the drawbacks Internet bring to us.
From what has been discussed above,we can draw such a definite conclusion that More good than harm.There is no denying that Internet can bring people far more benefits than drawbacks if supervised properly,and we are looking forward to a day when Internet could bring us more advantages than ever.
如果那地方不对给改改就更好了.

英语翻译如果那地方不对给改改就更好了.When it comes to Internet,different people have different views on this issue.Some people hold that the advantages of Internet are far more than its disadvantages; however,in my opinion,with the
谈到因特网,不同的人有不同的见解.有些人认为因特网的利远大于弊.尽管如此,在我看来,随着社会的不断发展,因特网在我们的生活中逐渐变得重要.我的理由如下,
首先,因特网可带给人们意想不到的利益.你可以在你的生活中找到主要变化.例如,你可以在因特网上找到一些你不知道的东西（you can find something unknown on internet,我的表达.）,因此,因特网在我们的社会中扮演着一个重要的角色.
此外,没有人可以否认因特网在我们生活中逐渐变得重要这一事实.如果没有因特网我们的世界会改变.所以非常重要的是人们无法没有因特网（最后这2句不知是表达不清,还是我没理解,总觉得怪怪的.）
不管怎样,象其他东西一样,因特网也有其不利的一面.例如,它有害我们的健康,我们不能忽视应特网给我们带来的不利.
从以上讨论的,我们可以下这样一个肯定的结论,就是利大于弊.不可否认的是如果管理正确的话,因特网可以带给人们很多的益处,我们也希望有一天因特网能带给我们更多的益处.
老兄啊,这是你的作文吧.你这如果是作文的话,很难拿到分啊.
就内容而言,在开头,你没有明确表示你自己的观点,你自己的观点是因特网很重要,但是在最后你的结论是因特网利大于弊.而且你阐述因特网的利弊时的内容不够好,尤其是第3段的那里.在第4段,说弊端的时候,因特网本身是没害处的,只是如果沉迷其中话,就另当别论.
就文章结构语法而言,语法错误多,然后就是连接词没处理好.
这只是我的个人观点!

说到互联网...(今天有事，下次再翻）

关于网络不同的人有不同的看法 有些人认为网络的优点远大于他的缺点 但是在我看来 随着近代社会的发展 我们的生活变的更重要。。。晕什么跟什么呀