帮我看看我的这段英语有没有语法错误 Leading Senior managers directly affected or evendetermine the success of a modern enterprise,The leader leads the way as a team at thecrucial moment,Need to make the right decisions,Inorder to enab

帮我看看我的这段英语有没有语法错误 Leading Senior managers directly affected or evendetermine the success of a modern enterprise,The leader leads the way as a team at thecrucial moment,Need to make the right decisions,Inorder to enab
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Leading
Senior managers directly affected or evendetermine the success of a modern enterprise,
The leader leads the way as a team at thecrucial moment,Need to make the right decisions,
Inorder to enable enterprises to stronger
Top level management
Job is considered to be the heart and soulof Apple's success,
and senior management to meet the needs ofthe times of the operating system,.
Middle level management
As middle managers,to see the needs of theconsumers,.
Always insist on and unchanging experienceto meet consumer demand,has introduced better meet consumer products
First-line management
Lower management closest to the consumer,a greater degree learned that
consumers liked a commodity,
beable to market the demand for timely reporting to middle management.enterprise
innovation closer to the consumer.
Top level management
All senior management are orders from Steve Jobs,and they command the
middle management and line management.In addition,for example,one of the
important part of the organization of competitors but also organizations like
Google.
Middle level management
Take orders from middle management to senior management,to maintain
relative stability,it must be timely improvements to accommodate growth.they
can lower prices appropriate,to ensure that senior management assured and
steady development of the first line management of loyalty.
First-line management
First line management is the lowest level of the management of the
company,customer service,accept customers' opinions and feedback to middle
management,there are Apple's first line management high working
efficiency,Apple in the market is
getting higher and higher.

帮我看看我的这段英语有没有语法错误 Leading Senior managers directly affected or evendetermine the success of a modern enterprise,The leader leads the way as a team at thecrucial moment,Need to make the right decisions,Inorder to enab
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楼主我仔细一看，我发现你语法错误蛮多的。有些少了谓语，有些不是句子，有些该用被动
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楼主我仔细一看，我发现你语法错误蛮多的。有些少了谓语，有些不是句子，有些该用被动
你这个文章你放在word里面过么？
你放word里先把简单的错误改了，word里底下是红色下划线的代表你词错误，绿色下划线代表你有语法错误，或者那个句子有问题

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语法基本没有错误，但是有的单词连在了一起，注意下就好了。供参考。