英语好的看下 这有什么要修改的 My hometown is in yibin,here is英语好的看下 这有什么要修改的 My hometown is in yibin,here is very bea utiful.Remember,the streets there are a l ot of garbage,and clean a lot now.In the past,th

英语好的看下 这有什么要修改的 My hometown is in yibin,here is英语好的看下 这有什么要修改的 My hometown is in yibin,here is very bea utiful.Remember,the streets there are a l ot of garbage,and clean a lot now.In the past,th
英语好的看下 这有什么要修改的 My hometown is in yibin,here is
英语好的看下 这有什么要修改的 My hometown is in yibin,here is very bea utiful.Remember,the streets there are a l ot of garbage,and clean a lot now.In the past,the streets are narrow,but now is ve ry wide.Trees,rarely before now.But no w,the car also many,is harmful to our bo dy.Now also improved the living standard s of people,traffic convenient,this is the c hange in my hometown

英语好的看下 这有什么要修改的 My hometown is in yibin,here is英语好的看下 这有什么要修改的 My hometown is in yibin,here is very bea utiful.Remember,the streets there are a l ot of garbage,and clean a lot now.In the past,th
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My hometown is inYinbin where is very beautiful. long time ago, there are a lot of garbages on the street, but now, they are very clean. In the past, the streets are narrow, but now is very wide. But...

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My hometown is inYinbin where is very beautiful. long time ago, there are a lot of garbages on the street, but now, they are very clean. In the past, the streets are narrow, but now is very wide. But development also brings our lots of problems. For example many people buy their own cars, it is harmful to our body because driving always make CO2 increase in the air. Now people's living standard is improved a lot, traffic becomes very convenient, these are the changes in my hometown
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My hometown is in yibin which is a very beautiful city. Remember, the streets there has a lot of garbages that it make the city cleaner a lot now. In the past, the streets are narrow, but now are very...

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My hometown is in yibin which is a very beautiful city. Remember, the streets there has a lot of garbages that it make the city cleaner a lot now. In the past, the streets are narrow, but now are very wide. Trees are rare before, but now, the cars are more,which are harmful to our body. Now the local government also improved the living standards,and made transportation more convenient. These are the changes in my hometown

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the streets there are a l ot of garbage=there were a lot of garbage here，and it is cleaner a lot now
are -were
rees, rarely before now-trees were rare before
the car also many,...

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here-is
the streets there are a l ot of garbage=there were a lot of garbage here，and it is cleaner a lot now
are -were
rees, rarely before now-trees were rare before
the car also many, is harmful to our bo dy-there are many cars
which is harmful to us
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My hometown is Yibin, it is very beautiful. once, the streets were full of a lot of garbage, but it is much cleaner now. In the past, the streets were narrow, but now it is much wider. Trees wer...

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My hometown is Yibin, it is very beautiful. once, the streets were full of a lot of garbage, but it is much cleaner now. In the past, the streets were narrow, but now it is much wider. Trees were rare years ago . But now, there are too many cars , they are harmful to our body. Now thepeople's standards of living has improved a lot , people can travell conveniently , this is the great changes in my hometown

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我的家乡在宜宾，这儿很漂亮，记得街上有一个很大的乐队，现在干净了许多，之前（以前），这个街很窄，但是现在，很宽

My hometown is in Yinbin.I remembered there were a lot of garbage in the street, but it's clean now. In the past, the streets were narrow, but it is very wide now.And there are many cars. It is convin...

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My hometown is in Yinbin.I remembered there were a lot of garbage in the street, but it's clean now. In the past, the streets were narrow, but it is very wide now.And there are many cars. It is convinent for us to take them.Now our living standard is improved.These are changes in our life. 注意单复数和时态的使用，还有句子的主谓宾位置。

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我的家乡在宜宾,这里非常bea utiful。记住,街上有l ot的垃圾,清洁很多现在。在过去,街道狭窄,但是现在已经一宽。树木,以前很少现在。但是没有w,汽车也很多,对我们是有害的。现在也改善了薄熙来dy生活水平年代人,交通方便,这是在我的家乡的c焊割……这是你写的作文吗？很有水平……别损了你用你用汉字写过来，我给你翻译过去…用翻译器？👎...

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我的家乡在宜宾,这里非常bea utiful。记住,街上有l ot的垃圾,清洁很多现在。在过去,街道狭窄,但是现在已经一宽。树木,以前很少现在。但是没有w,汽车也很多,对我们是有害的。现在也改善了薄熙来dy生活水平年代人,交通方便,这是在我的家乡的c焊割

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My hometown is Yibin, which is very beautiful. Remember, the streets were dirty but clean a lot now. In the past, the streets were narrow, but now is very wide. Trees, rarely before now. But now, it i...

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My hometown is Yibin, which is very beautiful. Remember, the streets were dirty but clean a lot now. In the past, the streets were narrow, but now is very wide. Trees, rarely before now. But now, it is harmful to our body with the car increasing. Now it also improved the living standards of people, traffic convenience, which is the change of my hometown

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here改it，remember去掉 后面改There are lot of rubbishes ,and now it is clean.后面but now的is改they are. 后面都不成句子啊，改：there are not many trees in the past.

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My hometown is in yibin, it is very beautiful. The streets were full of garbage before, but now they're cleaner. In the past, the streets were narrow, but now they are very wide. There ...

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My hometown is in yibin, it is very beautiful. The streets were full of garbage before, but now they're cleaner. In the past, the streets were narrow, but now they are very wide. There were few trees before, but now, there are so many trees. And many cars on the streets now and it's very convenient for people to go to work or have a trip. the living standards of people have being improved, these are the changes in my hometown.

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I was born in Yibin,which is a very beautiful place.I remember, there were lots of garbage in the street where were very narrow in the past,and lacking trees . But now the street is clearner, wider a...

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I was born in Yibin,which is a very beautiful place.I remember, there were lots of garbage in the street where were very narrow in the past,and lacking trees . But now the street is clearner, wider and are overgrown with trees.While there are more and more motor vehicles those bringing pollution ,which is harmful to our health.
About all,something are changing to the right direction,others are not.
我也就这水平了，你再好好改一下，希望对你有帮助

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My hometown is in yibin, which is very beautiful. Remember, there were a lot of garbage in the streets in the past and it is clean now. In the past, the streets were narrow, but now are very wide. ...

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My hometown is in yibin, which is very beautiful. Remember, there were a lot of garbage in the streets in the past and it is clean now. In the past, the streets were narrow, but now are very wide. There are few trees now ,but cars are more and more.It is harmful for our body. Now our life standrad is improving, and the traffic is convenient, this is the change in my hometown.附加一句楼主今天是不是上初一或者初二，这是学校的小作文吧？

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