修改病句I love sweets.but I don't eat it any more.

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修改病句I love sweets.but I don't eat it any more.
修改病句I love sweets.but I don't eat it any more.

修改病句I love sweets.but I don't eat it any more.
结合大家的答案我觉得我的修改如下
I love sweets.前半句肯定没错 sweets复数表示糖果
but I don't eat it any more.
这句话我觉得有2个错误
don`t一般现在时不能凸显我将来不再吃了的情况
所以建议换成won`t
另外更具有道词典
sweets属于复数
Sweets are foods that have a lot of sugar.甜食
所以最好改成them
所以有了I love sweets.but I won`t eat them any more.
加油哦~!

I love sweets,but I don't eat them any more
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, but I won't eat ........

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