作业帮八上期末英语求评点打分Now,the air is very dirty and gives people many problems .For example :the air is harmful for our health So l think we should do that:No.1 Try to walk to school or take the bus to school Don't use the car to go to sch
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八上期末英语求评点打分Now,the air is very dirty and gives people many problems .For example :the air is harmful for our health So l think we should do that:No.1 Try to walk to school or take the bus to school Don't use the car to go to sch
八上期末英语求评点打分
Now,the air is very dirty and gives people many problems .For example :the air is harmful for our health So l think we should do that:
No.1 Try to walk to school or take the bus to school Don't use the car to go to schol all the time
No.2 Don't smoking for a long time
No.3 when you leave the house ,Please turn off the lights and TV
lf everyone can do that ,the air will become clean!满分20,检查语法错,并打分（跪求专业滴）
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八上期末英语求评点打分Now,the air is very dirty and gives people many problems .For example :the air is harmful for our health So l think we should do that:No.1 Try to walk to school or take the bus to school Don't use the car to go to sch
gives 应改为has given
2. that 应改为 these
3.go to school by bus. go to school by car
4.smoking 改为smoke
5.leave house
6.clean 改为 cleaner
有一些语法错误,主旨比较清楚,要注意细节,自己多检查.
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