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英语翻译请帮忙看下翻译的句子语法是否正确,不对请帮忙更改,.
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英语翻译请帮忙看下翻译的句子语法是否正确,不对请帮忙更改,.
I did tell the workers to take good care of the problems.But if you think if necessary,you may spend about an hour at 2:00pm tomorrow to explain the problems detected in production in front of the workers.
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Last week I‘ve told the workers to beware of such problems. If you feel necessary, I can arrange an one hour training tomorrow at 2pm to reinforce the production problems that needs to be aware of.

The last week I had（应该用过去完成时）already told the workers that they needed(这里need是及物动词) to pay attention to these problems.
And if you consider that it is necessary to train everyone again to attac...

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The last week I had（应该用过去完成时）already told the workers that they needed(这里need是及物动词) to pay attention to these problems.
And if you consider that it is necessary to train everyone again to attach important to the problems which will be found in the process of producing these products,you can arrange it at 2:00 tomorrow afternoon and the training time is one hour.

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（你的英文，全是中国式的；看来应是强调‘工人’注意什么问题，而不是强调’你‘告诉他们什么；此句应译为：）
The workers have been informed paying an attention
on those problems last week . A retraining might be arranged if necessary and so a sched...

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（你的英文，全是中国式的；看来应是强调‘工人’注意什么问题，而不是强调’你‘告诉他们什么；此句应译为：）
The workers have been informed paying an attention
on those problems last week . A retraining might be arranged if necessary and so a schedule can be at 2:00 PM to 3:00PM tomorrow for discussing about the problems foun out during production .

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Last week, I have informed the workers to pay attention to these problems. If you feel that there is a need to retrain the workers on the problems found during production, I will arrange another training session tomorrow at 2pm. The session will last about an hour.