帮我看看这封英文信有什么错误!Dear Mr WilliamsThank you for you kind reply,I am responding your booking confirming.Due to our supplier will vist our compant on 17th November,There will be 23 people who wil attentd.Could you please prepar

帮我看看这封英文信有什么错误!Dear Mr WilliamsThank you for you kind reply,I am responding your booking confirming.Due to our supplier will vist our compant on 17th November,There will be 23 people who wil attentd.Could you please prepar
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Dear Mr Williams
Thank you for you kind reply,I am responding your booking confirming.Due to our supplier will vist our compant on 17th November,There will be 23 people who wil attentd.Could you please prepar 8-course lunch for us,which shold the best in your hotel.I really apperiate you've done for us.
If you have any queries,Please contact me.I look forward to hearing form you.
Yours sincerely
Tim Jones

帮我看看这封英文信有什么错误!Dear Mr WilliamsThank you for you kind reply,I am responding your booking confirming.Due to our supplier will vist our compant on 17th November,There will be 23 people who wil attentd.Could you please prepar
第一行第四个单词改成your ,
I am responding your booking confirming一般回信不这样说.可以改为 I'm writing to you for your booking confirmation.
Due to 后面不能接从句.可以改成：Due to our supplier's visiting our company on .
第四句简单一点,直接说23 people will attend .
which shold the best in your hotel 你想表达最好在你们酒店,对吗?可以改成：It's much better in your hotel.
I really apperiate you've done for us.这句的意思是他已经为你做了.改成：I really apperiate what you do for us.
最后一行,问题的单词写错了.
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应该是：
Thank you for your kind reply. I am responding to your booking confirmation. Our supplier will vist our company on 17th November and 23 people will attend. Could you please prepare a 8-course...

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Thank you for your kind reply. I am responding to your booking confirmation. Our supplier will vist our company on 17th November and 23 people will attend. Could you please prepare a 8-course lunch for us, which is the most popular in your hotel. I really appreciate what you've done for us.
If you have any questions, please contact me. I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely
Tim Jones
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Dear Mr Williams,
Thank you for you kind reply. I am responding to your booking confirmation.
Our supplier will come and visit our company on November 17th (或者 the 17th of November). There wil...

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Dear Mr Williams,
Thank you for you kind reply. I am responding to your booking confirmation.
Our supplier will come and visit our company on November 17th (或者 the 17th of November). There will be 23 people who will attend. Could you please prepare an 8-course lunch for us, which should be the best in your hotel? I really appreciate your help!
If you have any questions, please contact me. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely
Tim Jones

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Thank you for your kind reply. I am responding to your booking confirmation. Our supplier will vist our company on 17th November, and 23 people will attend. Could you please prepare a 8-course lunch f...

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Thank you for your kind reply. I am responding to your booking confirmation. Our supplier will vist our company on 17th November, and 23 people will attend. Could you please prepare a 8-course lunch for us, which is the most popular in your hotel. I really appreciate what you've done for us.
If you have any questions, please contact me. I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

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