英语查语病.I know you are here and receive my message.Why do not reply to me.How do you think?you don't know how happy when I saw your Q-zone.Perhaps some memories do not move it better.I wish you happiness forever.希望可以把错的改正

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英语查语病.I know you are here and receive my message.Why do not reply to me.How do you think?you don't know how happy when I saw your Q-zone.Perhaps some memories do not move it better.I wish you happiness forever.希望可以把错的改正
1.I know you are here and receive(receiving) my message.
2.Why do not reply to me.
Why not reply to me?或者 Why don't you reply to me?你为什么不回应我?reply to 回应,这个没错
3.How do you think?
有错吗?假如有错的话,应该是：
How do you think about it
4.you don't know how happy when I saw your Q-zone.
you don't know how happy ( I was ） when I saw your Q-zone.
5.Perhaps some memories do not move it better.
这句话我没看明白啊,不知道是不是想表达这个意思：有些记忆不去动它更好,那就不能这么说,而是：Perhaps it's better for some memories not to be moved.
6.I wish you happiness forever.
I wish you are happy forever.
或者：I wish your happiness forever.

recieve 应为received
why do not应为why not
i wish you to be happy forever

第二行：Why do not you reply to me?(你这样写会缺主语，虽然在口语中可以这样用，不过在考试中最好别用）
第四行：you don't know how happy I am when (I am) seeing your Q-zone (I am 可以省略）
最后一行：I wish you happy forever (wish sb. +形容词，这样比较符...

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I know you are here and (have received) my message.
Why (not )reply to me.
How do you think?
you (didn't) know how happy when I saw your Q-zone。
Perhaps some memories do not move it better。
I wish you (happy ) forever。

第一句把receive改为receiving
第二句把reply to me其中的to删去
第三句正确
第四句吧happy和when中加上I was，saw嘛改为caught a sight of...显得更高级
第五句基本正确
第六句把you后面改为are happy forever.或者i was you could lead a life which ...

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I know you are here and have received my message.
Why don't you reply to me?
How do you think?感觉有点奇怪，最好是What do you think of it？
You don't know how happy I was ,when I saw your Q-zone。
I wish you happy forever。

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I know you are here and have received my message.这句是帮你修的更好一点。
Why do not reply to me?
How do you like it?/ What do you think about it? how是方式，你写的原句意思是“你怎样想的？”答句可以是“我安静地想。或我睁大了眼睛想。这种句式”我猜你想表达的意思是想问TA看了message后的想法吧。
You don't know how happy I am when I saw your Q-zone.
。。好吧，这句我看不懂你想表达什么。
I wish you will be happy forever. happiness是名词。
那啥，我八卦一下，你是表白了，想问TA想法么？

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what do you think ?
I wish you are happy forever

英语 查语病.I know you are here and receive my message.Why do not reply to me.How do you think?you don't know how happy when I saw your Q-zone.Perhaps some memories do not move it better.I wish you happiness forever.希望可以把错的改正

英语查语病.I know you are here and receive my message.Why do not reply to me.How do you think?you don't know how happy when I saw your Q-zone.Perhaps some memories do not move it better.I wish you happiness forever.希望可以把错的改正