求大师帮忙修改下作文,看看有没有什么语法错误,感觉自己连词用的好奇怪啊From the passage i know that a man fortunately survived in a traffic accident with other psople'shelp,which reflects the warmth of our societyIn case

求大师帮忙修改下作文,看看有没有什么语法错误,感觉自己连词用的好奇怪啊From the passage i know that a man fortunately survived in a traffic accident with other psople'shelp,which reflects the warmth of our societyIn case
求大师帮忙修改下作文,看看有没有什么语法错误,感觉自己连词用的好奇怪啊
From the passage i know that a man fortunately survived in a traffic accident with other psople's
help,which reflects the warmth of our society
In case of emergency,the people passing the accident scene choosed to spare no effort to save
the man instead of ignoring him .Besides,however terrible the sitution is,they never gave up.Therefore,what imressed me most is their self-sacrifice spirit,which i think account for the survival of
the man

求大师帮忙修改下作文,看看有没有什么语法错误,感觉自己连词用的好奇怪啊From the passage i know that a man fortunately survived in a traffic accident with other psople'shelp,which reflects the warmth of our societyIn case
From the passage,i know that a man fortunately survived in a traffic accident with the help of others'.This reflected the warmth of our society.
In case of emergency,passerbys who witnessed the accident chose to spare no effort to save
the man instead of ignoring him .Despite the terrible situation,they never gave up.Therefore,what impressed me most is their self-sacrifice spirit,which i think account for the survival of the man.
为什么是self-sacrifice spirit

From the passage i know that a man survived fortunately in a traffic accident with other psople's help,which reflects the warmth of our society
In case of emergency,the ...

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From the passage i know that a man survived fortunately in a traffic accident with other psople's help,which reflects the warmth of our society
In case of emergency,the people passing the accident scene chose to spare no effort to save the man instead of ignoring him .Besides, however terrible the sitution is,they never gave in.Therefore, what imressed me most is their self-sacrifice spirit, which i think account for the survival of
the man.
基本上没啥问题，连词和语法还可以啦

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