请帮我看看这篇英语文章,有问题的地方请加以改正!这是自我介绍,我英语很烂,可能有很多问题,希望能帮我吧语法什么的改正确!hello everyone ,my name is ,i come from jingzhou ,it is a beautiful city and has a

请帮我看看这篇英语文章,有问题的地方请加以改正!这是自我介绍,我英语很烂,可能有很多问题,希望能帮我吧语法什么的改正确!hello everyone ,my name is ,i come from jingzhou ,it is a beautiful city and has a
请帮我看看这篇英语文章,有问题的地方请加以改正!
这是自我介绍,我英语很烂,可能有很多问题,希望能帮我吧语法什么的改正确!
hello everyone ,my name is ,i come from jingzhou ,it is a beautiful city and has a long history like quanzhou.as we all know that the romance of the three kingdoms is china four masterpieces,the above mentioned several times in jingzhou .besides,jingzhou also has many celebrities,such as zhangjuzheng /liubei/guanyu/ect.they are the heroes of history.get down to business,i am a calm person maybe some people think that i am very invoverted.but once i determination of you,you will feel my passion!i like play football pingpang ball.i am glod to meet all of you and i hope we will become good friends!

请帮我看看这篇英语文章,有问题的地方请加以改正!这是自我介绍,我英语很烂,可能有很多问题,希望能帮我吧语法什么的改正确!hello everyone ,my name is ,i come from jingzhou ,it is a beautiful city and has a
文章有很多语法上的错处,以下是我替你在大体上的更正:
hello everyone ,my name is ,i come from jingzhou ,it is a beautiful city and (要加 it) has a long history like quanzhou.as we all know that the romance of the three kingdoms is (china four masterpieces 要改为 one of the four masterpieces of China),( the above mentioned several times in jingzhou 要改为 in which,Jingzhou has been mentioned a number of times) .besides,jingzhou also has many celebrities,such as (zhangjuzheng /liubei/guanyu/ect这些名字已为西方人所熟识,所以不用遵照英语倒转的写法,但要大写和用逗号隔开:Zhanggiuzheng,Liu Bei,Guen Yu and so on).they are the heroes of history.get down to business,i am a calm person(加个逗号,) maybe some people think that i am very invoverted(应该是 introverted).but once i (determination of you 应该要改为:you get to know me),you will feel my passion!i like play(是:playing) football (要加 and)pingpang ball(应该用:table tennis).i am glod(是 glad) to meet all of you and i hope we will become good friends!
另外,句子开头、我 "I" 、人名和地名(是尊有名词)要用大写.标点符号後面要有一个空位.
很希望我的回答会对你有帮助.如有不明白,可以再追问,并祝你进步!