帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有语法错误,题目是以English and me.English is very important in the world.Because many countrys are useing English.I think study English must hard.But I am not study hard.And my English Is not very well ,So

帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有语法错误,题目是以English and me.English is very important in the world.Because many countrys are useing English.I think study English must hard.But I am not study hard.And my English Is not very well ,So
帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有语法错误,
题目是以English and me.
English is very important in the world.Because many countrys are useing English.I think study English must hard.But I am not study hard.And my English Is not very well ,Sometimes I think English is ery difficult.But Sometimes I think it is interesting too.I will study hard in the future.I will read English every day.I will listen English songs.And I will try to talk with my classmates in English.I thingk I will study English ery well.

帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有语法错误,题目是以English and me.English is very important in the world.Because many countrys are useing English.I think study English must hard.But I am not study hard.And my English Is not very well ,So
countries为复数形式
i think that study english must be hard
but i do not study hard
i will listen to english songs
有些错误已经帮你改过来了 加油学习

除了几个打错了的地方,没有什么语法错误,什么very,think,不过你是想说学英语必须很努力吗?如果是的话,就没问题了,只是我觉得这个顺序问题,觉得有些前后不搭的样子,那个useing,拼写应该是using,我觉得这个地方用speaking比较好.

改了一遍，没有做颜色标记，把单词拼错的，标点打错的和比较重复的句子改了。你大体上写的不错，要注意细节，加油！
English is very important in the world.Because people in many countries speak English.I think we must study English hard.But I do not study ...

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改了一遍，没有做颜色标记，把单词拼错的，标点打错的和比较重复的句子改了。你大体上写的不错，要注意细节，加油！
English is very important in the world.Because people in many countries speak English.I think we must study English hard.But I do not study hard enough, so my English Is not very well. Sometimes I think English is very difficult,but sometimes I think it is interesting. I will study harder in the future.I will read English every day, listen to English songs, and try to talk with my classmates in English. I think if I can do them my English will be much better.

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English is very important in the world。Because many countries are using English。I think I should study English hard。But I do not study hard。And my English is not very good ，Sometimes I think English...

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English is very important in the world。Because many countries are using English。I think I should study English hard。But I do not study hard。And my English is not very good ，Sometimes I think English is evry difficult,though sometimes I think it is interesting too。I will study hard in the future。I decide to read English every day。I will listen to English songs。And I will also try to talk with my classmates in English。I thingk I will study English very well。。

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English is very important in the world, because many countrys are using English.I think we must study English hard, but I am not studying hard. And my English Is not very good . Sometimes I think...

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English is very important in the world, because many countrys are using English.I think we must study English hard, but I am not studying hard. And my English Is not very good . Sometimes I think English is very difficult. But Sometimes I think it is interesting to. I will study hard in the futur. I will read English every day. I will listen to English songs. And I will try to talk with my classmates in Englis. I think I will study English very well.

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English is very important in the world because it is used in many countries. I think to study English well needs great effort, yet I did not study hard before。My English ...

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English is very important in the world because it is used in many countries. I think to study English well needs great effort, yet I did not study hard before。My English Is not very good. Sometimes I think English is very difficult。But Sometimes I think it is interesting。I will study hard in the future。I will read English every day。I will listen to English songs。And I will try to talk with my classmates in English。I am sure I can study English very well。
But I think you are creating mistakes on purpose,boy.

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English is very important in the world。Because many countrys are useing English。I think study English , must be hard。And I do not study hard。And my English Is not very go...

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English is very important in the world。Because many countrys are useing English。I think study English , must be hard。And I do not study hard。And my English Is not very good ，Sometimes I think English is ery difficult。But Sometimes I think it is interesting too。I will study hard in the future。I will read English every day。I will listen to English songs。And I will try to talk with my classmates in English。I thingk I will study English ery well。我建议你写句子是多变换几次主语，换几种表达方式，这样读起来的话，感觉要自然一些，你的已经很不错啦，再接再厉，希望能帮到你

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