求修改英语作文语法和句子结构Yesterday,I got a fortune cookie.There was a fortune paper in it.The paper said:"In the future,your troubles will soon cease and good fortune will smile upon you."That was a great a point and excetly describe

求修改英语作文语法和句子结构Yesterday,I got a fortune cookie.There was a fortune paper in it.The paper said:"In the future,your troubles will soon cease and good fortune will smile upon you."That was a great a point and excetly describe
求修改英语作文语法和句子结构
Yesterday,I got a fortune cookie.There was a fortune paper in it.The paper said:"In the future,your troubles will soon cease and good fortune will smile upon you."That was a great a point and excetly described my curent situations-The trouble cease my fortune and not let me move forward.My trouble is that English learning puts so much preesure on me,because it alawys let me to fall into a emberassing situation when I comunicate with my friends or people.They mock and jeer my English speaking skills and pronunciations.Sometime I felt so disapponted and my life is going to be ruined,if I don't handle it well.Ideally,it would be great if I am going to change it.I would make more coversations with someone whose English is orally well.Then,speaking more with my friend ,but they have to esteem me at first.Furthermore,there are some others ways that offer to me to learn English nicely and conviniently.For example,watching English movie or TV.That was useful for my speaking ,because I can imitate and follow the actors' pronunciations to practice English Better.Finally,I hope my expiration will be real and the wonderful fortune soon come and smile upon me.

求修改英语作文语法和句子结构Yesterday,I got a fortune cookie.There was a fortune paper in it.The paper said:"In the future,your troubles will soon cease and good fortune will smile upon you."That was a great a point and excetly describe
Yesterday,I got a fortune cookie.Inside,there was a paper,which is said:" xxxxxx" That was a great point(这里不知道想表达什么..and exactly described my current situation-----The troubles ceased my fortune and my passion.My main trouble was that English learning exerts so much presure to me.Because my english level always made me fall into an embarassing situation when I comunicated with my friends or other people.They mocked and jeered my English speaking skills and pronunciations.Sometimes I felt so disappointed,just as my life was going to be ruined if I didn't handle it well.
Ideally,it would be great if I am going to change my situation actively.For example,it is possible for me to talk with those guys whose oral English is superb.Additionally,talking in English more with my friends who esteem me.Furthermore,watching English movies and Tv programs,which are quite useful to my English speaking,because I can imitate what speakers say then follow the actors' pronunciations.After practising more,my English must be better.Finally,I hope my expections will come true,and the wonderful fortune will also come soon and smile upon me.

句号改为that ,较短的句子可以用who ,which ,what 等来代替就行了，多用点谚语