英语大神能帮我检查下语法或表达上的问题吗,在线等,万分感谢希望达人们能指出其中的各种问题,表达上的、语法上的,谢谢Thirdly, as an international student in UK, I quickly got used to the British life styl

英语大神能帮我检查下语法或表达上的问题吗,在线等,万分感谢希望达人们能指出其中的各种问题,表达上的、语法上的,谢谢Thirdly, as an international student in UK, I quickly got used to the British life styl
英语大神能帮我检查下语法或表达上的问题吗,在线等,万分感谢
希望达人们能指出其中的各种问题,表达上的、语法上的,谢谢
Thirdly, as an international student in UK, I quickly got used to the British life style and academic atmosphere, which gives me the ability of independently solving problems and integrate into the new work. I have the ability and willing to learn and progress and devote myself to the centre!
Last but not least, I think I can meet all the essential criteria and some desirable criteria, if everything goes smoothly, this research job would be the beginning of my career life, I have ambition that apply my research skills and all energy to the work!

英语大神能帮我检查下语法或表达上的问题吗,在线等,万分感谢希望达人们能指出其中的各种问题,表达上的、语法上的,谢谢Thirdly, as an international student in UK, I quickly got used to the British life styl
got used to the British life style改成
get used to the British lifestyle
the ability of independently solving problems改成
the ability to independently solve problems
learn and progress and devote改成
learn,make progress and devote
criteria都改成criterias
,if everything goes smoothly,this research job would bethe beginning of my career life,改成
.If everything goes smoothly,this research job will be the beginning of my career life.
,I have ambition that apply my research skills and all energy to the work!改成
.I have ambition to apply my research skills and all the energy to the work!
祝你成功吧!

got used to（习惯于） 改成 adapt to（适应了）是不是好一点？
gives 和 integrate 的单复数是不是应该统一呢？

好多错误，

我也想说 ，基本语法不过关啊。1.got used to 改成 get used to ,与后面的时态保持一致。2.the ability of independently solving problems and integrate into the new work 改成the ability to solvingpproblems independently, 后面的我都没明白你想表达什么...

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我也想说 ，基本语法不过关啊。1.got used to 改成 get used to ,与后面的时态保持一致。2.the ability of independently solving problems and integrate into the new work 改成the ability to solvingpproblems independently, 后面的我都没明白你想表达什么。

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