可不可以帮我改一下这个句子怎么看怎么别扭Smoking problem has gradually becomes a serious health concern among the world which already attracted the world’s attention.

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可不可以帮我改一下这个句子怎么看怎么别扭Smoking problem has gradually becomes a serious health concern among the world which already attracted the world’s attention.
可不可以帮我改一下这个句子
怎么看怎么别扭
Smoking problem has gradually becomes a serious health concern among the world which already attracted the world’s attention.

可不可以帮我改一下这个句子怎么看怎么别扭Smoking problem has gradually becomes a serious health concern among the world which already attracted the world’s attention.
Smoking problem has gradually become a serious health concern which has already attracted the world’s attention.

吸烟问题已经逐渐成为一个严重的健康问题在世界已经引起了世人的关注
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简单点：The smoking problem has become a health issue all over the world.
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The smoking problem has become a health issue all over the world. It does raise the interesting and the whole world is thinking about it.

Smoking problem has gradually become a serious health concern around the world, which has already attracted the world's attention.

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