求这篇改错答案、高手进!谢谢!急China is an ancient civilization with cultures dating back more than 4, 000 year．Basicelements for the modern world such as paper, gunpowder, paper money, or compassesoriginated in China．Today, China is

求这篇改错答案、高手进!谢谢!急China is an ancient civilization with cultures dating back more than 4, 000 year．Basicelements for the modern world such as paper, gunpowder, paper money, or compassesoriginated in China．Today, China is
求这篇改错答案、高手进!谢谢!急
China is an ancient civilization with cultures dating back more than 4, 000 year．Basic
elements for the modern world such as paper, gunpowder, paper money, or compasses
originated in China．Today, China is again at the forefront of world, with Chinese goods
reach all parts of the world．The Chinese culture have also fascinated many people．In
the Shaolin Monasteries, the Great Wall of China or the Forbidden City of Beijing, China
has its unique arts and architectures that what draw thousands of visitors every year．The
Chinese food is equal popular around the world and it is loved by much non-Chinese．
But in China, the food can found in great varieties and is different in region to region．
So join us and experience all these．

求这篇改错答案、高手进!谢谢!急China is an ancient civilization with cultures dating back more than 4, 000 year．Basicelements for the modern world such as paper, gunpowder, paper money, or compassesoriginated in China．Today, China is
Last weekend we went mountain-climbing.Even the
heavy rain in the morning could not prevent us【from going】.Setting off very early,we went along an extreme narrow road【with】 high spirits.On 【each】side of the road were green fields
and 【 】farm houses.We could hear the sound of the rain
and our footsteps mixing with our【 laugh】.At noon
we reached the top of the mountain.【What】 surprised us
most 【】was the beauty of the scenes.After having short
【rest】 and sharing 【】 the food we had brought ,we started
going down.It 【was raining】 even 【heavier】.We were wet 【into】 the skin,and we still sang and laughed happily.

英语改错My geography teacher said light traveled more quickly than sound.light traveled 应为travels。 has gone to 应为has been to wag used to

更正在括号处标明，应该有一个单词是楼主错打了（years）！
China is an ancient civilization with cultures dating back (加入to) more than 4, 000 (years)．Basic elements for the modern world such as paper, gunpowder, paper mone...

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更正在括号处标明，应该有一个单词是楼主错打了（years）！
China is an ancient civilization with cultures dating back (加入to) more than 4, 000 (years)．Basic elements for the modern world such as paper, gunpowder, paper money, (and) compasses originated in China．Today, China is again at the forefront of (加入the) world, with Chinese goods (reaching) all parts of the world．The Chinese culture (has) also fascinated many people．In the Shaolin Monasteries, the Great Wall of China or the Forbidden City of Beijing, China has its unique arts and architectures that (去掉what) draw thousands of visitors every year．The Chinese food is (equally) popular around the world and it is loved by (many) non-Chinese．But in China, the food can (加入be) found in great varieties and is different (from) region to region．So join us and experience all these．

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last weekend we went mountain-climbing.even the
heavy rain in the morning could not prevent us go. setting 1.__going
off very early,we went along an extreme narrow road,all 2.__extremely

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last weekend we went mountain-climbing.even the
heavy rain in the morning could not prevent us go. setting 1.__going
off very early,we went along an extreme narrow road,all 2.__extremely
in high spirits.on every side of the road were green fields 3.__each
and some farm house.we could hear the sound of the 4.__houses
rain and our footsteps mixing with our laughter.at noon 5.__mixed
we reach the top of mountain.that surprised us 6.__reached
most there was the beauty of scenes.after having a short 7.__scenery
rest there and sharing with the food we had brought,we 8.__去掉with
staredgoing down.it had rained even harder.we were 9.__去掉had
wet to the skin,and we still sang and laughed happily 10.__and 改成but

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light traveled 应为travels。
has gone to 应为has been to
wag used to 应为used to 。am interste in 应为intersted.
That he saw 为what。 if he 为wheather
forward to see 为seeing
Seeing from 为seen

When I was 5，my father bought me the piano with all the money he had saved.Every day I practised playing it as my father demanded.But before long,I transferred my interest to some other thing, so I be...

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When I was 5，my father bought me the piano with all the money he had saved.Every day I practised playing it as my father demanded.But before long,I transferred my interest to some other thing, so I began to avoid practising it.When my father realized this,he encouraged me,but he was strict with me than before.With his help,I went through the hardest time and made great progress.Here I sincerely express my gratitude to my father.On the journey of life,our parents light the light of hope for us.What they have done broaden our horizon.No one deserves bigger thanks than our parents.
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1、20世纪50年代末，在位于现在西安市长安区内的西周镐京遗址中,考古工作者发现许多【铁器】、青铜器、骨器、玉器、陶器和其他各类器物。
西周无铁器
2、秦孝公任用商鞅推行变法，使秦朝经济得到发展，军队战斗力不断加强，发展成为【战国后期】最富有的封建国家。
改为战国时期，中国的战国时代指公元前475年～公元前221 年，而商鞅变法是在公元前365年，应该算中期，
3、...

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1、20世纪50年代末，在位于现在西安市长安区内的西周镐京遗址中,考古工作者发现许多【铁器】、青铜器、骨器、玉器、陶器和其他各类器物。
西周无铁器
2、秦孝公任用商鞅推行变法，使秦朝经济得到发展，军队战斗力不断加强，发展成为【战国后期】最富有的封建国家。
改为战国时期，中国的战国时代指公元前475年～公元前221 年，而商鞅变法是在公元前365年，应该算中期，
3、东汉著名科学家张衡发明的地动仪，是世界上公认的最早的【预测】地震方向的仪器。
地动仪并不是预测地震方位，而是感应地震方向，无法起到预测的功能
4、【汉武帝时期】，黄河下游决口，十几个郡遭受洪灾。汉武帝下令治理黄河，并派水利专家王景主持修河，修筑了千余里的黄河大堤，此后八十多年，黄河下游没有发生过大水灾。
王景是东汉著名的水利工程专家，不是西汉武帝时期
5、小亮问小明：“西晋灭亡后，皇族司马睿重建的晋朝为什么叫东晋呢？”小明回答说:“因为他把都城定在长安以东的【洛阳】，所以历史上称为东晋。”
东晋的都城不在洛阳，而在建康（今南京地区），

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注意第二题！
1、20世纪50年代末，在位于现在西安市长安区内的西周镐京遗址中,考古工作者发现许多【铁器】、青铜器、骨器、玉器、陶器和其他各类器物。
西周时期并没有铁器，铁器是东周后期，也就是战国时期才开始出现的，当时铁器还相当珍贵！
2、秦孝公任用商鞅推行变法，使秦朝经济得到发展，军队战斗力不断加强，发展成为战国后期最富有的【封建国家】。
秦朝是中国历史上第一个中...

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注意第二题！
1、20世纪50年代末，在位于现在西安市长安区内的西周镐京遗址中,考古工作者发现许多【铁器】、青铜器、骨器、玉器、陶器和其他各类器物。
西周时期并没有铁器，铁器是东周后期，也就是战国时期才开始出现的，当时铁器还相当珍贵！
2、秦孝公任用商鞅推行变法，使秦朝经济得到发展，军队战斗力不断加强，发展成为战国后期最富有的【封建国家】。
秦朝是中国历史上第一个中央集权的封建国家！而不是秦国~所以，秦统一六国之后才能称为封建国家，统一六国之前仅仅是一个诸侯国，又怎能成为封建国家，仅仅是封建萌芽得到长足发展而已~
3、东汉著名科学家张衡发明的地动仪，是世界上公认的最早的【预测】地震方向的仪器。
地动仪不能预测地震，当今社会也没有号称可以预测地震的仪器，地动仪只能感应地震方位，即时赈济灾情而已~
4、【汉武帝时期】，黄河下游决口，十几个郡遭受洪灾。汉武帝下令治理黄河，并派水利专家王景主持修河，修筑了千余里的黄河大堤，此后八十多年，黄河下游没有发生过大水灾。
王景是东汉著名的水利工程专家，不是西汉武帝时期~
5、小亮问小明：“西晋灭亡后，皇族司马睿重建的晋朝为什么叫东晋呢？”小明回答说:“因为他把都城定在长安以东的【洛阳】，所以历史上称为东晋。”
东晋的都城不在洛阳，而在建康（今南京地区）~
其实一楼的答案已经很不错了~只是有少许瑕疵~多有借鉴还请见谅~
但是第二题确实是我的答案才正确~

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