哪位大侠帮我看看这篇英语小日记有没有语法错误看看哪里错了,高三水平的.如果能润色一下,Now coming the first holiday since I went to college,the six months of college life was my first trip away from home to study a

哪位大侠帮我看看这篇英语小日记有没有语法错误看看哪里错了,高三水平的.如果能润色一下,Now coming the first holiday since I went to college,the six months of college life was my first trip away from home to study a
哪位大侠帮我看看这篇英语小日记有没有语法错误
看看哪里错了,高三水平的.如果能润色一下,
Now coming the first holiday since I went to college,the six months of college life was my first trip away from home to study all by myself.
Six months of college life have taught me a lot,So this is what I dream of university life,there were faint sense of loss,but there are more surprises,I've met a lot of new friends,and I has also experien ced a lot of impressive things.Now go home,I would like to be properly chat with my parents the life I have six monthsI have been living.

哪位大侠帮我看看这篇英语小日记有没有语法错误看看哪里错了,高三水平的.如果能润色一下,Now coming the first holiday since I went to college,the six months of college life was my first trip away from home to study a
Now coming the first holiday since I went to college(.) the six months of college life was my first trip away from home to study all by myself.
Six months of college life (had) taught me a lot,(and) this (was) what I (dreamt) of university life,there were faint sense of loss but more surprises(.) (I) met a lot of new friends and also experienced a lot of impressive things.Now (going?) home,I would like to properly chat with my parents (about) the life I (had) (for the) six months I (had) been living.
楼主注意全文时态要保持一致.另外语义表达要更得体,因为第二段最后我看了好多遍才大概明白你的意思...

Now comes the first holiday since I went to college, the six months of college life was my first trip away from home to study all by myself.
Six months of college life have taught me a lot, wh...

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Now comes the first holiday since I went to college, the six months of college life was my first trip away from home to study all by myself.
Six months of college life have taught me a lot, which has been what I dream of university life, in which I kind of missed myself (faint sense of loss), but more surprises, I've met a lot of new friends,and I have also experienced a lot of things really impressive. Now at home, I would like to chat with my parents the life I have had during the six months away from them in college in a proper way.

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