这是我写的作文 我不知道哪些错误 能帮我改改吗?Being polite I’ll meet new people .how should meet new people .I think :should I shake hands should I hug them .I fell I should shake hands .I 'll answer the phone .how should I answ

这是我写的作文 我不知道哪些错误 能帮我改改吗?Being polite I’ll meet new people .how should meet new people .I think :should I shake hands should I hug them .I fell I should shake hands .I 'll answer the phone .how should I answ
这是我写的作文 我不知道哪些错误 能帮我改改吗?
Being polite
I’ll meet new people .how should meet new people .I think :should I shake hands should I hug them .I fell I should shake hands .I 'll answer the phone .how should I answer the phone I think :should I say "Hello" should I take a message I fell I should say "Hello"and take a message.I well walk on busy streets .How should I walk on busy streets .I think :should I say :"excuse me should I Push I fell I should say :"excuse me " I 'll wait for a bus .I should line up .
look ,they all do of very good .listen they say is very good too

这是我写的作文 我不知道哪些错误 能帮我改改吗?Being polite I’ll meet new people .how should meet new people .I think :should I shake hands should I hug them .I fell I should shake hands .I 'll answer the phone .how should I answ
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I well walk on 改为I will ```
listen they say is very good too这句如果是“听他们说话也很好”的意思,我建议改为
listen what they say is····

Being polite
I’ll meet strangers.what should I do when meeting strangers ? Should I shake hands with them or hug them?I think shaking hands is acceptable in our country. I 'll answer the phone ....

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Being polite
I’ll meet strangers.what should I do when meeting strangers ? Should I shake hands with them or hug them?I think shaking hands is acceptable in our country. I 'll answer the phone .Then how should I answer the phone ?should I say "Hello" to them or should I take a message ? I think I should say "Hello" and take a message. When walking on crowded streets, how can I ask peole let me pass? I think "excuse me " will help me. when waiting for a bus. Standing on the line is neccesary.
Look ,they all do a good job. Being polite can be found everywhere.
其实不知道你想表达什么，只是改了下语法。希望能帮上忙。

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