英文作文改错,Hello everyone.My name is Sherry.And Sherry is a name of one of the sweet wine ,just like my character—liking to bring happiness to everyone .I have been working as a class teacher for 15 months in NDI.During the 15 months,I get

英文作文改错,Hello everyone.My name is Sherry.And Sherry is a name of one of the sweet wine ,just like my character—liking to bring happiness to everyone .I have been working as a class teacher for 15 months in NDI.During the 15 months,I get
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Hello everyone.My name is Sherry.And Sherry is a name of one of the sweet wine ,just like my character—liking to bring happiness to everyone .I have been working as a class teacher for 15 months in NDI.During the 15 months,I get so many help from my colleagues or leaders.So I have learnt a lot of things through do my work.Such as,how to teach my students and get along with them.I still remember what an exciting feeling when the first student told me that she like me teaching her.NDI is a great place which can help the students and upgrade myself at the same time.I was so shine before .However I can communication with everybody.There are so many opportunities to practice my skill of teaching and communication.So I believe that I should work much harder than before to reward my students and my company.

英文作文改错,Hello everyone.My name is Sherry.And Sherry is a name of one of the sweet wine ,just like my character—liking to bring happiness to everyone .I have been working as a class teacher for 15 months in NDI.During the 15 months,I get
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Hello everyone.My name is Sherry.Sherry is the name of one type of sweet wine--just like my character:Bringing sweetness and happiness to everyone .I have been a class teacher for 15 months in NDI.During these 15 months,I received a lot of assistance from my colleagues or leaders.So in the process,I have learnt a lot of things,such as,how to teach the students and get along with them.I still remember an encouraging moment when the first student told me that she liked my teaching.NDI is a great place which can help students in their learning,and upgrade myself at the same time.I was a very shy person before this.However I can still communicate with everybody.There are so many opportunities to practice my skill of teaching and communication.So I believe that I should strive harder than before to reward my students and my company.

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Hello everyone. My name is Sherry. As you may know, Sherry is the name of a sweet wine , just like my character— I like to bring happiness to everyone .I have been working as...

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没有什么大错，但可以稍稍改动，使之更流畅：
Hello everyone. My name is Sherry. As you may know, Sherry is the name of a sweet wine , just like my character— I like to bring happiness to everyone .I have been working as a class teacher for the past 15 months in NDI. During these 15 months, I have had so much help from my colleagues and leaders. I have learnt a lot of things through my work such as how to teach my students and to get along well with them. I still remember what an exciting feeling I had when the first student told me that she liked my teaching. The NDI is a great place where I can not only help my students, but upgrade myself at the same time. I was shy before. Now, I can communicate with everybody comfortably. There are so many opportunities to practice my skills of teaching and communication. I promise you I will work harder in the future to pay back to my students and to my company as well.

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Hello everyone. My name is Sherry. Sherry is the name of one type of sweet wine--just like my character: Bringing sweetness and happiness to everyone .I have been a class teacher for 15 months...

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不错!
Hello everyone. My name is Sherry. Sherry is the name of one type of sweet wine--just like my character: Bringing sweetness and happiness to everyone .I have been a class teacher for 15 months in NDI. During these 15 months, I received a lot of assistance from my colleagues or leaders. So in the process, I have learnt a lot of things, such as, how to teach the students and get along with them. I still remember an encouraging moment when the first student told me that she liked my teaching. NDI is a great place which can help students in their learning, and upgrade myself at the same time. I was a very shy person before this. However I can still communicate with everybody. There are so many opportunities to practice my skill of teaching and communication. So I believe that I should strive harder than before to reward my students and my company.

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