兔子们,虾米们,帮俺改改日记呀!英语的Christmas day is coming soon,that is important for uh!And it is the most popular day in the year except the summer vacation and the winter vacation.Because we needn't study on December 25th,how wonde

兔子们,虾米们,帮俺改改日记呀!英语的Christmas day is coming soon,that is important for uh!And it is the most popular day in the year except the summer vacation and the winter vacation.Because we needn't study on December 25th,how wonde
兔子们,虾米们,帮俺改改日记呀!英语的
Christmas day is coming soon,that is important for uh!And it is the most popular day in the year except the summer vacation and the winter vacation.Because we needn't study on December 25th,how wonderful it is!
If we want an interesting festival,we must prepare for it.Well,let me think,we need a Christmas tree,maybe we need more,and the snow flakes which is hung on the wall and windows.Besides these,uh,we also need a bag of candies to eat,and some chocolates.And the most important one,careless of me to forget that!We need a Christmas father,oh,no!That means:the Christmas father's work uniform.We can ask our teacher put it on,that is so funny!
That is so interesting!We must buy them for Christmas day now.Let’s go!
这个也改一改！
What a good day today!
I finished all the homework yesterday and I knew I get a highest point in the Chinese examination.Ii just lose two points!How incredible it is!I’m too happy to believe that!I feel so happy today!
In other Chinese examination,I got the good mark too!I think I’m good at Chinese now!
We have math group leader,we also have English group leader.I think I have ability to do it well— I want to be a Chinese group leader!
Ms.Li,please give me a chance to do it well!

兔子们,虾米们,帮俺改改日记呀!英语的Christmas day is coming soon,that is important for uh!And it is the most popular day in the year except the summer vacation and the winter vacation.Because we needn't study on December 25th,how wonde
Christmas time is coming soon,that is important for us!And it is the most popular hoilday in the year except the summer break and the winter break.Because we don't need to study on December 25th,how wonderful is this!
If we want an interesting festival,we must prepare for it.Well,let me think,we need a Christmas tree,maybe we need more,and the snow flakes which is hung on the wall and windows.Besides these,uh,we also need a bag of candies to eat,and some chocolates too.Most importantly ,careless of me to forget that!We need a Santa Claus,oh,no!That means:the Santa Claus uniform.We can ask our teacher to put it on,that is so funny!
That is so interesting!We must buy them for Christmas time now,let's go!
What a good day is today!
I finished all the homeworks yesterday and I I got the highest point in the Chinese examination.I just lose two points!How incredible is it!I’m too happy to believe that!I feel so happy today!
In another Chinese examination,I got the good mark too!I think I’m good at Chinese now!
We have math group leader,we also have English group leader.I think I have ability to do it well— I want to be a Chinese group leader!
Ms.Li,please give me a chance to do it well!

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