does anybody kindly to correct my email in english?I wrote a mail to my friend in english,but I m leaner,I couldnt write a correc sentences in english,could you plese help to correct my english,thanks!my mail:sorry it's late to reply your mail ,I wor

does anybody kindly to correct my email in english?I wrote a mail to my friend in english,but I m leaner,I couldnt write a correc sentences in english,could you plese help to correct my english,thanks!my mail:sorry it's late to reply your mail ,I wor
does anybody kindly to correct my email in english?
I wrote a mail to my friend in english,but I m leaner,I couldnt write a correc sentences in english,could you plese help to correct my english,thanks!
my mail:
sorry it's late to reply your mail ,I work at a small company which sells electric parts in XXX,I got a partime job in this company,today is busy day,how about you?

does anybody kindly to correct my email in english?I wrote a mail to my friend in english,but I m leaner,I couldnt write a correc sentences in english,could you plese help to correct my english,thanks!my mail:sorry it's late to reply your mail ,I wor
I'm sorry that it's late to reply your mail.I work at a small company which sells electric parts in XXX.Actually,I just got a partime job here.Today is a busy day and I feel kind of tired.How about you?

原文：I wrote a mail to my friend in english,but I m leaner, I couldnt write a correc sentences in english,could you plese help to correct my english,thanks!
改动：I wrote a mail to one of my friend ...

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原文：I wrote a mail to my friend in english,but I m leaner, I couldnt write a correc sentences in english,could you plese help to correct my english,thanks!
改动：I wrote a mail to one of my friend in English,but I am an basic English leaner, I could't write correct sentences in English, Would you please helping me with my English。Thank you!
原文：sorry it's late to reply your mail ,I work at a small company which sells electric parts in XXX,I got a partime job in this company,today is busy day,how about you?
改动：Sorry for late replying！I works in a small company which sells electronic parts in XXX。
I work as a partime here。It （代表了今天，习惯语）is very busy day。How about you?

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Could anybody kindly correct my email in English?
I wrote an email to my friend in English, but I'm a leaner, I couldn't write a correc sentence in English. Could you plese help correct my Engl...

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Could anybody kindly correct my email in English?
I wrote an email to my friend in English, but I'm a leaner, I couldn't write a correc sentence in English. Could you plese help correct my English? Thanks!
my email:
sorry it took me so long to reply your email, I work at a small company which sells electrical (this means 电的，if you want to say 电子,that should be electronic) parts in XXX, I got a partime job in this company, today is a busy day, how about you?

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leaner-learner correc -corrext
could you plese help to correct my english-correct my mail