帮我修改一下这几个句子吧,要求意思不变.I am sure the advancedresearch methods and outstanding faculty of graduate school at xxxUniversity will help me to be an excellent engineer.I believe that my researchability will contribute to x

帮我修改一下这几个句子吧,要求意思不变.I am sure the advancedresearch methods and outstanding faculty of graduate school at xxxUniversity will help me to be an excellent engineer.I believe that my researchability will contribute to x
帮我修改一下这几个句子吧,要求意思不变.
I am sure the advanced
research methods and outstanding faculty of graduate school at xxx
University will help me to be an excellent engineer.I believe that my research
ability will contribute to xxx University in the area of civil and
environmental engineering.I also wish if I can study in xxx University,I
could devote myself to many kinds of social activities and develop the Sino-Japanese
friendship.
主语都是I感觉很重复,想不出来怎么改,

帮我修改一下这几个句子吧,要求意思不变.I am sure the advancedresearch methods and outstanding faculty of graduate school at xxxUniversity will help me to be an excellent engineer.I believe that my researchability will contribute to x
i m fully convinced that, the advanced reserch methods and outstanding faculty of the graduate school at xxx University can assist me to be an excellent engineer. Surely at the same time, my research capabilities will contribute to boosting xxx University's development in the field of environment engineering. If lucky enough to have the honor to study in xxx University, i will devote myself to social activities as much as possible and develop the Sino-Japanese friendship.
备注：
1.i m fully convinced我完全有理由相信
2.as much as possibile修饰devote myself与activities没关系

I am sure that I will become an excellent engineer /with the help of outstanding faculty /that are from graduate school at xxx University ,I will be great with the advanced
research methods
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I am sure that I will become an excellent engineer /with the help of outstanding faculty /that are from graduate school at xxx University ,I will be great with the advanced
research methods
. I believe that I have the research
ability,and I will contribute to the area of civil and
environmental engineering of xxx University . I also wish if I can study in xxx University, I
could devote myself to many kinds of social activities ,and I believe I can develop the friendship between Sino&Japanese


.你干嘛用，用于演讲吗？用于演讲要尽量用断句，有些词要重复才能听起来有激情，有力量。如I have a dream.




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