能帮我看一下这份英文自我介绍还可以吗?Good afternoon.It is really a great honor to have the opportunity for this interview.My name is ***.I’m a sophomore major in English at *** University.With tremendous interest in English interp

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能帮我看一下这份英文自我介绍还可以吗?Good afternoon.It is really a great honor to have the opportunity for this interview.My name is ***.I’m a sophomore major in English at *** University.With tremendous interest in English interp
能帮我看一下这份英文自我介绍还可以吗?
Good afternoon.It is really a great honor to have the opportunity for this interview.My name is ***.I’m a sophomore major in English at *** University.With tremendous interest in English interpretation,I sent application to your company.
I have a habit of making plans so that I can manage my time effectively.Last summer holiday,I got my first internship as an assistant; Last December,I managed to be the Expo volunteer.And now,I’m striving to be a member of your team.I am a person with stable personality and high sense of responsibility.I fear no risks and never confused by any interference because I am bright and dedicated.Although I am a freshman in the field of interpretation,I am aggressive to learn and progress.
I’m the leader of English corner at college.I want to help more friends get interested in English.Vocabulary can be accumulated; the sense of language can be cultivated.My English is not 100% fluent,but I ‘m improving and that is what every outstanding interpreter has experienced.
Given a chance to work for your company,I will try my best to make contributions and prove that your investment is a smart choice.
Thank you very much for your attention!

能帮我看一下这份英文自我介绍还可以吗?Good afternoon.It is really a great honor to have the opportunity for this interview.My name is ***.I’m a sophomore major in English at *** University.With tremendous interest in English interp
tremendous 是大的惊人的意思 也有可怕的意思 换一个吧
I sent application to your company太绕了 直接apply for the job就好了
I’m striving to be a member of your team.I am a person with stable personality and high sense of responsibility.I fear no risks and never confused 这段用用独立主格 或者从句 不要三个以I开头的短句 很没有气势
然后各段之间稍微衔接一下更好了~

Good afternoon. It is really a great honor for me to have this opportunity to introduce my self. My name is ***. I’m a sophomore major in English at *** University. I have great interest in English in...

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Good afternoon. It is really a great honor for me to have this opportunity to introduce my self. My name is ***. I’m a sophomore major in English at *** University. I have great interest in English interpretation. I am a well-organised person, and i have a habit of making plans so that I can manage my time effectively. Last summer holiday, I got my first apprenticeship as an assistant; Last December, I managed to be the Expo volunteer. And now, I’m striving to be a member of your team. I am a person with stable personality and high sense of responsibility. I fear no risks and never confused by any interference because I am bright and dedicated. Although I am a freshman in the field of interpretation but I am aggressive to learn and progress.
I’m the leader of the English corner at college. I want to help more friends to get interested in English. I believe that vocabulary can be accumulated and the sense of language can be cultivated. My English is not 100% fluent, but I am improving and that is what a outstanding interpreter requires.
Give me chance to work for your company, I will try my best to make my contributions and prove that your investment is a smart choice.
Thank you very much for your time.=!
我帮你修改了一下 自己看着办吧

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I have a habit of making plans so that I can manage my time effectively. 脱离下文
Given a chance to work for your company, I will try my best to make contributions and prove that your investment is a ...

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I have a habit of making plans so that I can manage my time effectively. 脱离下文
Given a chance to work for your company, I will try my best to make contributions and prove that your investment is a smart choice.
这个的意思是已经给了你这个职位，但现在实际还没给，应该IF
其他没什么大问题了
祝你成功~

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很好，加油啊！看好你！加油！！！！！

能帮我看一下这份英文自我介绍还可以吗?Good afternoon.It is really a great honor to have the opportunity for this interview.My name is ***.I’m a sophomore major in English at *** University.With tremendous interest in English interp 能不能帮我看一下这份英文自我介绍还可以吗?Good afternoon. It is really a great honor to have the opportunity for this interview. My name is ***. I’m a sophomore major in English at *** University. With tremendous interest in Engl 北京英语中级口语自我介绍我是学汽修的请帮我弄份英文的自我介绍 能跟我写份英文的自我介绍吗?exemple:what do you think yourself? 谁能帮我看份英文机械图纸 (辊轴加工）帮我把图纸中英文翻译下也可以,最好是能看懂机械图纸了 谁可以帮我写一篇英文的自我介绍! 圣诞晚会偶是主持人,能帮我弄一下开场白和结束语吗?英文的,带自我介绍的,翻译也要, 可以帮我看一下这个水表上面的数字代表什么吗?我还能用多少吨水呢? 能帮我看一下这句话英文怎么说吗?下周一因为李小姐有事需要我进公司,所以我下周一的休假会取消. 谁帮我修改一下英文自我介绍?这是我写的一篇英文自我介绍,总觉得有些语病,但不知道怎么改,谁能帮我看一下?Good morning,my dear teachers.I’m very glad to be here,so first of all,I will thank all of you to give 能帮我看一下这句英文写得对吗?Could you please check with your boss?Thanks. 哪位能帮我看一下这份报告单标本满意度是满意细胞量大于5000个颈管细胞无化生细胞有滴虫霉菌疱疹Hpv无...哪位能帮我看一下这份报告单标本满意度是满意细胞量大于5000个颈管细胞无化生 能帮我看一下这句话英文怎么说吗?王先生因故不能参加本月15日晚上的活动. 能帮我解说一下这些英文的功能吗 帮我看一下英文和中文字分别是什么字体哪里能下载 可以帮我翻译一下英文地址吗? 你能帮我们吗?当然啦.这句话可以帮我翻译一下吗? 我能看一下你的英语书吗?英文?