英语：I hope i can receive the so ASAP since we need arrange to much things according to the so.I hope i can receive the so ASAP since we need arrange to much things according to the so.Thank you very much!这句话有语病吗?我想表达的是

英语：I hope i can receive the so ASAP since we need arrange to much things according to the so.I hope i can receive the so ASAP since we need arrange to much things according to the so.Thank you very much!这句话有语病吗?我想表达的是
英语：I hope i can receive the so ASAP since we need arrange to much things according to the so.
I hope i can receive the so ASAP since we need arrange to much things according to the so.Thank you very much!
这句话有语病吗?我想表达的是：我希望尽快收到SO因为我需要根据SO来安排很多事情.

英语：I hope i can receive the so ASAP since we need arrange to much things according to the so.I hope i can receive the so ASAP since we need arrange to much things according to the so.Thank you very much!这句话有语病吗?我想表达的是
这样表达可以
need 后面加 to

呵呵，一看我们就是同行，你是做计划或者生管或者sales的吧？
其实这句话可以这样说的，改一个地方就好：I hope I can receive the SO ASAP since we need arrange so many things according to it.
或者：Could you please place SO ASAP due to I need to ar...

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呵呵，一看我们就是同行，你是做计划或者生管或者sales的吧？
其实这句话可以这样说的，改一个地方就好：I hope I can receive the SO ASAP since we need arrange so many things according to it.
或者：Could you please place SO ASAP due to I need to arrange the production and other things according to it? 这样说有礼貌一点
希望能帮助你，看在是同行采纳我吧，谢啦~

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too much 不是 to much。
accord不太准确，

I hope i could receive the so ASAP as soon as possible since i need it to arrange too much things.
这样就可以了

I hope I can recieve the SO ASAP since we will need to arrange many things according to the SO. Thank you.
Many things.
We will need to arrange.
OR:
I hope I can recieve the SO ASAP since there are too many things we need to arrange according to the SO. Thank you

第一，应该用too much而不是to much；
第二，much用在不可数名词前，可以说too much thing或者too many things（个人认为这个更好），但不能说"too much things"。换句话说，如果想用things，那么前面就该用many；如果想用much，后面就该用thing。
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第一，应该用too much而不是to much；
第二，much用在不可数名词前，可以说too much thing或者too many things（个人认为这个更好），但不能说"too much things"。换句话说，如果想用things，那么前面就该用many；如果想用much，后面就该用thing。
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我再总结和指正一下楼上的修改意见哈：
第三，need后面加不加to，两可。加to的时候,need是实义动词；不加，是情态动词。所以都行。
第四，since后面的从句不一定要用将来式，因为since本身可以有这一层意思在里面，而且一般现在时和将来式——放在这个语境下，都行。所以这个也不用改。
第五，还有，楼上说是同行的那位的句子也有错。due to后面不能直接加从句，要说也应该说成：Could you please send me the SO ASAP due to the fact that I need to arrange the production and others accordingly?

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I hope that I can receive reply as soon as possible.I'm trying to arrange my things.Thank you very much!
特别注明：第一人称 I 在句中的任何位置都只能用大写