能帮我提升一下这篇作文吗,主要从高级句式和高级词汇方面(本人未过四级)Small round face,brown hair,of medium build and always in white,this is my friend G,who always looks lovely.For one thing,she is patient and approa

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能帮我提升一下这篇作文吗,主要从高级句式和高级词汇方面(本人未过四级)Small round face,brown hair,of medium build and always in white,this is my friend G,who always looks lovely.For one thing,she is patient and approa
能帮我提升一下这篇作文吗,主要从高级句式和高级词汇方面(本人未过四级)
Small round face,brown hair,of medium build and always in white,this is my friend G,who always looks lovely.
For one thing,she is patient and approachable,I mean,she can help others heartfelt.For another thing,she occasionally gives the appearance of a little silly.For instance,if we seek for advise from her when we want to purchase something,her answer must be "cheap economic and affordable".Oh,did she comes from Mars.Did not she discovery the three words has the same meaning.
From what I have known to her,her favorite hobby is the kid.She would listen to the teacher with strong spirit if the teacher talking about small baby.

能帮我提升一下这篇作文吗,主要从高级句式和高级词汇方面(本人未过四级)Small round face,brown hair,of medium build and always in white,this is my friend G,who always looks lovely.For one thing,she is patient and approa
Small round face,brown hair,medium build and always (dressed in )white,this is my friend G,who always looks lovely.
For one thing,she is patient and approachable,in other words,she help others heartfeltly 句尾副词.For another,she occasionally gives the appearance of silly.For instance,if we ask for (seek有探索的意思这里ask就好)advice(se结尾时动词) from her when we want to purchase something,her answer will be "cheap ,economic and affordable".Oh,does (一般现在时)she come from Mars.Does not she discover(加y是名词)that the three words have (复数)the same meaning?
So far as I know,she like kids(the 有特定意思这里不适) very much(孩子不是业余爱好诶).She will listen to the teacher with high concentration if the teacher is talking about small babies.