英语作文,帮忙 查看语法错误 Facing the "U" Shape floor,a young guy is thinking that it is so exciting while an old man is thinking that it is so dangerous.What the pictures depicts,the different ideas between two men,is thought-

英语作文,帮忙 查看语法错误 Facing the "U" Shape floor,a young guy is thinking that it is so exciting while an old man is thinking that it is so dangerous.What the pictures depicts,the different ideas between two men,is thought-
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  Facing the "U" Shape floor,a young guy is thinking that it is so exciting while an old man is thinking that it is so dangerous.What the pictures depicts,the different ideas between two men,is thought-provoking.It seems to convey that different individuals have different ideas,feelings and attitudes when facing the same things or situation.

  In my opinion,firstly,we should respect different ideas because everyone makes decisions basing on their own circumstance.We have no right to force others to change their decision.However,secondly,everyone should take responsibilities for what they decide to do and should not affect others.It is no doubt that behavious,which would affect others negatively,should be blamed in any circumstance.Last but not the least,when we make a decision or plan to do somethings,we should consider our own situation and ability,which may confine our decision.Since everyone's abilities are finite,if we make a decision,which is not in the rage of our abilities,it may cause a bad result.

  Generally speaking,different thoughts and ideas are the constitution of our vivid world so that different thoughts and ideas should be embraced as long as they are positive and harmless.

感觉写得很普通,高中水平似的.可我是要去考研- -,麻烦各位老师指出其中的语法错误,谢谢啊

英语作文,帮忙 查看语法错误 Facing the "U" Shape floor,a young guy is thinking that it is so exciting while an old man is thinking that it is so dangerous.What the pictures depicts,the different ideas between two men,is thought-

what does the picture describe?

between two men is 去掉逗号

make decisions based on

no right to force others to change their decisons

take responsibilities for what he decides to do

behavious,which may may 代替would 好点

plan to do something

should be embraced 改成should be accepted 你看呢